Murmurations of the Heart
You...inside and out59 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Congratulations, my friend -- this sublime poem is so worthy of the win! I'm sorry I am so far behind. I'm just not on the site nearly as much as I was, but I'm very glad I didn't miss this jewel!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Congratulations, my friend -- this sublime poem is so worthy of the win! I'm sorry I am so far behind. I'm just not on the site nearly as much as I was, but I'm very glad I didn't miss this jewel!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Wow, O Canadian Lady - what a wonderful surprise this morning!! :) So good to hear from you! ;) Many thanks for the congrats and the stars.... but, honestly, the best part is that little grin of yours there in the listing! :) Hope you're taking care up there -- Spring's coming soon! Hooray! ;) Yvette
Comment from pome lover
well, the triple crown! my goodness.
congratulations, madame!
It is a lovely poem, Yvette. Although I doubt very much that you have a jaded soul.
"Silken whispers" - what a pretty phrase.
Congrats again,
Katharine
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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well, the triple crown! my goodness.
congratulations, madame!
It is a lovely poem, Yvette. Although I doubt very much that you have a jaded soul.
"Silken whispers" - what a pretty phrase.
Congrats again,
Katharine
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Let's just say that I've gotten very good at smiling through certain things... :) :) But I'm so happy to hear you say that, my Beautiful LoneStar Lady -- you truly have me smiling over here! ;) And I'm glad you enjoyed this one.... 'twas from that place we all visit sometimes of needing shelter from the comments and the harshness that life can be and even if that's just silence and another's breathing, that's good, too. :) :) May sunshine and solace find you this weekend, Katharine! ;) Yvette
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Thank you, Yvette!!!
I will most happily enjoy the sunshine and solace this weekend before a root canal Monday. ugh
Then a'course, I'll have to write a poem about it, although - second thought - there might be a bit of cussin in it.
Hope you have a happy weekend and dont have to grade papers.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win agaaaain, Yvette. Nice sssssibilance. Cheersssss. LIZ Cool how you got the blue-to-white fade thing going--wonder how you managed that!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Congrats on your win agaaaain, Yvette. Nice sssssibilance. Cheersssss. LIZ Cool how you got the blue-to-white fade thing going--wonder how you managed that!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanx, LIZ -- glad you enjoyed this one! :) We do all need a place of shelter from the comments and the harshness that life can be sometimes and even if that's just silence and another's breathing, that's good, too. :) :) Oh, and the text: just be sure to use the advanced editor when your entering your text for a post -- it lets you do a whole lotta stuff! ;) May sunshine and solace find you this week! ;) Yvette
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Thanks, Yvette. Yes, the advanced editor is a big help on the text--but it doesn't apply to the footnote section, wherein we need to italicize title references. I've been forced to use quotation marks as a poor compromise. I did mention this to Tom--I asked if it would be permissible to put our notes at the bottom of the piece itself.
Comment from Rod A. White
Congrats on the win, Yvette! Another beautiful offering as usual! I'm sure you have many admirers that are blessed by your steady stream of poetic creations =) I know I am!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Congrats on the win, Yvette! Another beautiful offering as usual! I'm sure you have many admirers that are blessed by your steady stream of poetic creations =) I know I am!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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LOL! Yeah, not too sure about the 'many' but I take what I can 'buy' ... LOL!! ;) :) :) You are far too kind, sir, but I do so appreciate your review -- and, I know I said it before and have not yet had a chance to respond to your response, but WELCOME Back!! It is really good to see that smile and get your perspective again!! ;) Take good care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Murmurations of the Heart, has the proper formatting and describes the subtle feelings we experience as soothing begins in our souls. Nice.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This five-line poem, Murmurations of the Heart, has the proper formatting and describes the subtle feelings we experience as soothing begins in our souls. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Bill -- much appreciated, sir! ;)
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you again, mysterious committee members, for this wonderful honor! :) I truly appreciate the shiny stars and boost to the teacher supply spending account (LOL!!)... :) :) :) ;)
In all seriousness: Merci Beaucoup!
Comment from poetwatch
Whispers are what the soul desires to smile through the tears. An escape from the pains of life is best shared with a pillow and a sheet sleeping. Tomorrow is another day. Very nice5 Line Poem Yvette. Squeeze that pillow harder. :) ;)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Whispers are what the soul desires to smile through the tears. An escape from the pains of life is best shared with a pillow and a sheet sleeping. Tomorrow is another day. Very nice5 Line Poem Yvette. Squeeze that pillow harder. :) ;)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Jose -- great to hear from you sir! :) We do all need a place of shelter from the comments and the harshness that life can be sometimes and even if that's just silence and another's breathing, that's good, too. :) :) May sunshine and solace find you this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
From what I know of your poetry, there is not a jaded part in your soul. LOL. Do like the phrasing for silken whispers and quiet solace.
Cute idea about your coloring of text, which is a good companion to your artwork.
Mark
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Yvette,
From what I know of your poetry, there is not a jaded part in your soul. LOL. Do like the phrasing for silken whispers and quiet solace.
Cute idea about your coloring of text, which is a good companion to your artwork.
Mark
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Mark, and for the compliment... it is much appreciated, sir!! ;) We do all need a place of shelter from the comments and the harshness that life can be sometimes and even if that's just silence and another's breathing, that's good, too. :) :) May sunshine and solace find you this week! ;) Yvette
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Yep, the sun is shining this morning!
Comment from Janet Foor
Murmurations of the Heart is a lovely 5 line poem. Beautiful message and lovely presentation and lovely "s" sounds throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Murmurations of the Heart is a lovely 5 line poem. Beautiful message and lovely presentation and lovely "s" sounds throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanx for the review, Janet! :) We do all need a place of shelter from the comments and the harshness that life can be sometimes and even if that's just silence and another's breathing, that's good, too. :) :) May sunshine and solace find you this week, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mr.write_4u
Once again, one of my favorites. I'm gonna have to try the advanced method of posting. You've taken the already lovely poem and enhanced it perfectly. Thank you for sharing... and teaching, again. Good luck.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Once again, one of my favorites. I'm gonna have to try the advanced method of posting. You've taken the already lovely poem and enhanced it perfectly. Thank you for sharing... and teaching, again. Good luck.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanx, Larry... so glad you enjoyed this one - I get a little carried away with the effects sometimes - lol! :) May sunshine and solace find you out there this week, sir! ;) Yvette
