Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

This is a great twenty word poem. You kept my interest as I read through.
Your thoughts came together nicely. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Geoff

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A powerful sentiment for the contest, Geoff - love your formatting of it into the diamond shape!! ;) I would only suggest removing a lot of the capitalization as it is a bit 'crowding' in this limited form and takes away from your shape: really only need capitalize 'Jesus' and 'Earth' and, perhaps 'Our'..... I would also suggest the use of an ellipsis (...) after view. Of course both are suggestions and not corrections... makes a difference in the consumption and not the message! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020

Thanks Yvette for the review and suggestions.
Geoff

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

You made a good analogy of nature and spiritual ....it was nice to read. It's a reflection of your faith. I think you did a great job. Good luck

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated
Geoff

Comment from Martie Zuckerman

Exceptional

I enjoyed this piece. I found it very well written, presented, and complete. You told a story in so very few words; you embraced a religion in the process as well a natural occurrence. I found this impressive. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020

Thanks for your review and the six stars. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Wils, excellent metaphor and a wonderful presentation to illustrate faith and hope for the rise again of tomorrow.

This is a well written and published entry into the contest and I wish you great luck with the Committee. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Geoff

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a truly beautiful 20 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used great words that are so true and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this very much. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks Teri, for this very positive review.
Much appreciated.
Geoff

reply by Teri7 on 17-Feb-2020

you are so welcome. blessings, Teri