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Missed in Oblivion

12 line rhyming poem fun in February

14 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL -- yeeesss, sleep was what it was supposed to be about... :) :) :) A wonderful offering for the February Fun Contest, Marjon -- thanx so much for joining in the Fun! :) Take care and have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
    Dear Yvette, thank you for your reaction. I am still a bit sleepy!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the February Fun Poem writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of National Public Sleeping Day.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Sharon. Let's sleep!
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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Ah! I love this one and I do believe I voted for it. Uh-oh! Am I allowed to say that? Public Sleeping Day caught my eye and I am ALL ABOUT THAT!
Great job with this and I wish you luck with it! I missed this contest. I need to quit reviewing and actually write something. At any rate, Good Luck!
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Wendy, thank you so much for this comment. We need several sleeping days a year I think (I also want to compensate for several sleepless nights a year. Lol. The sixth star is a big compliment, thanks again.
Comment from Minglement
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Well you found a unique Feb day to celebrate and great artwork to accompany it. Your poem makes an entertaining entry for this contest. Loved your last two lines. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Minglement, thanks a lot!
reply by Minglement on 17-Feb-2020
    You're most welcome.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Ha! Love it! I wished If known sooner, I would have called off work noting I was honoring this great tradition for more sleep! Thanks for sharing this quite unknown holiday. I will definitely remember it for next year!! xoxo

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Diana. Let's sleep a day away!
reply by Diana L Crawford on 17-Feb-2020
    Can we suggest they do two or three a year or month!! LOL!!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Not a bad idea! In fact, I like it a lot!
reply by Diana L Crawford on 17-Feb-2020
    haha!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Gail Denham
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Well a National sleeping day sounds pretty inviting, I can tell you - as we rise often before 6 AM - and I stay up late. Not a good combo. Not sure what the term means (that you used) perhaps I don't want to know if it's questionable. Interesting poem for sure.
and I like that holiday

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Gail, thanks a lot! A nice review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written February fun poem about the third Monday in February to be the National Public Sleeping Day. It seems just what we need after the January and February struggle to balance the budget again.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi Sandra! Officially (according to Google) the National Public Sleeping Day is the second Monday of February. Only I missed it -as you can read in my poem, for obvious reasons- that's why I decided to honor the Sleeping Day one week later. Thanks for the five stars!
Comment from tfawcus
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Priceless! I guess there are some things that you simply can't sleep through. Better luck next Monday with your observance of National Public Sleeping Day!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    tfawcus, thanks for the comment, and Monday I cannot be reached, I'll be sleeping!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I sounds like sleep was far more important here, he he he, I enjoyed your musing and sweet words of forgetfulness, no excuse, and no regret here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thanks, Dolly!
Comment from kahpot
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What an excellent photo for this work, as your words describe this February sleeping day, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Kahpot, I thank you very much for your nice comment.