Haiku ( a fierce thunderstorm)
contest entry53 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I think this is a terrific haiku and written in the traditional form. Your satori line is both witty and profound.
I wish you great good luck with the Contest Committee and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
I think this is a terrific haiku and written in the traditional form. Your satori line is both witty and profound.
I wish you great good luck with the Contest Committee and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Gloria,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Hello lady how you doing find I pray.
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem,
they are a perfect match your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Hello lady how you doing find I pray.
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem,
they are a perfect match your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Miss Cookie,
Thanks so much for your review, and very kind comments.
Lots of love...Portia
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It was my pleasure.
God be with you.
Cookie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent! The Nature effect in this Haiku is positive and eternally appreciable, as all fierce thunderstorms are not so disastrous; they bring in something good; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Excellent! The Nature effect in this Haiku is positive and eternally appreciable, as all fierce thunderstorms are not so disastrous; they bring in something good; well said, well done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Comment from Auryn Eisley
A fantastic Haiku. I loved your use of aggressive word choices like 'pulverising' and 'groundbreaking' to encapsulate the destructive nature of thunderstorms. I really enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
A fantastic Haiku. I loved your use of aggressive word choices like 'pulverising' and 'groundbreaking' to encapsulate the destructive nature of thunderstorms. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent Haiku. I love the picture you paint with the words. Great connection with the "fierce" "pulverizing" and "groundbreaking" words used in each line. Hugh
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Excellent Haiku. I love the picture you paint with the words. Great connection with the "fierce" "pulverizing" and "groundbreaking" words used in each line. Hugh
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Hugh.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear pharp! I do like the theme and execution. The satori is strong. Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
This is a fine piece of poetry dear pharp! I do like the theme and execution. The satori is strong. Bravo my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Rebekka,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Haiku ( a fierce thunderstorm coming through), is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
"Haiku ( a fierce thunderstorm coming through), is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Duchess,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Portia,
You're more than welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Cindy Decker
Very clever poem! Haiku poems are difficult; you have to fit an idea into 17 syllables. You've done this nicely! Some haiku poems seem forced or contrived, but yours flows naturally. When I write haiku from now on, I will strive to be clever like you. A very memorable poem.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Very clever poem! Haiku poems are difficult; you have to fit an idea into 17 syllables. You've done this nicely! Some haiku poems seem forced or contrived, but yours flows naturally. When I write haiku from now on, I will strive to be clever like you. A very memorable poem.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Cindy,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Comment from Janet Foor
Hail can certainly do a lot of damage. We had such a storm and it ruined our roof. In fact the whole neighborhood had to replace their roofs.
I enjoyed your well written haiku. Nice satori.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Hail can certainly do a lot of damage. We had such a storm and it ruined our roof. In fact the whole neighborhood had to replace their roofs.
I enjoyed your well written haiku. Nice satori.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Janet,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Awesome haiku. A very good 5/7/3 syllables count. Winter kigo. Good cutting juxtaposition. Pretty presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Hello my friend
Awesome haiku. A very good 5/7/3 syllables count. Winter kigo. Good cutting juxtaposition. Pretty presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Gypsy,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings..Portia