An Angel in the Meadow
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Just as I thought--another piece of an interesting story. You two write an interesting story and leave the readers hang high and dry waiting for the next chapter. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Just as I thought--another piece of an interesting story. You two write an interesting story and leave the readers hang high and dry waiting for the next chapter. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Greetings, our dear friend! Cathy and I send three "SALUTES," to you, and they are for your review of: (1) A Black Panther for Bret, (2) An Angel in the Meadow - Chapter 1, and (3) A Brown Recluse. Thanks for the reviews, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Barbaraj1
You certainly know how to write an action filled chapter. First a snake bite
and then a panther. Your characters need to stay inside. I am enjoying your story.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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You certainly know how to write an action filled chapter. First a snake bite
and then a panther. Your characters need to stay inside. I am enjoying your story.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Barbara!
Great hearing from you. Oh, I don't write 'em--Cathy does! I just keep her quill wet with ink. Do you believe this? I didn't figure you would. Thanks for the review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from robyn corum
Hey, guys!
Another interesting chapter, though it seemed weird that both of them had life-threatening injuries (from animals) at pretty much the same time.
Other notes:
1.) I was asking for trouble. "So what(?)" I thought.
2.) "Hi, Angel! . . . (C)an you hear me, Beautiful?
3.) A baby deer nursed (from) its momma while she ate
Otherwise, this was fine reading. Thanks a lot!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hey, guys!
Another interesting chapter, though it seemed weird that both of them had life-threatening injuries (from animals) at pretty much the same time.
Other notes:
1.) I was asking for trouble. "So what(?)" I thought.
2.) "Hi, Angel! . . . (C)an you hear me, Beautiful?
3.) A baby deer nursed (from) its momma while she ate
Otherwise, this was fine reading. Thanks a lot!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Another "SALUTE," Robyn!
Thanks for the review, kind words, help, and taking the time to read our work. As always, it is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Tpa
Once again, I enjoyed your skills and talent in writing an excellent chapter. It does in every manner has the recipe of a good scene, conflict, thoughts and looking ahead to the author's writing and sharing it with the reader for superb entertainment.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Once again, I enjoyed your skills and talent in writing an excellent chapter. It does in every manner has the recipe of a good scene, conflict, thoughts and looking ahead to the author's writing and sharing it with the reader for superb entertainment.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Once again, a "SALUTE," our dear friend, for the review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A triple cliffhanger! Oh! What to do what to do?! How can you do this to me! I came here expecting to read something interesting and got this... not just interesting but intriguing as well. Now I'm going to have to bookmark this to find out what happens later on. Your fault! :)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A triple cliffhanger! Oh! What to do what to do?! How can you do this to me! I came here expecting to read something interesting and got this... not just interesting but intriguing as well. Now I'm going to have to bookmark this to find out what happens later on. Your fault! :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hello, our dear friend. Look . . . a 3rd "SALUTE!" Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Hmm! So, the "Triple Cliffhanger" is "YOUR" fault, huh? I'm so sorry; yet, Cathy made me do it--goody goody! FYI, Cathy (aka Tootie) and I (aka Commando) are co-authoring (1) An Angel in the Meadow, (2) Joined at the Hip, (3) My Jigsaw Puzzle and (4) Love Long Distance. We're posting "My Jigsaw Puzzle, Chapter 1" 2/15/20. We would appreciate your review and feedback. We look forward to reviewing your work as well. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love to read your work. Snakes and panthers in your story brings wildlife to life (creatures). Although, I would not like to be bit by either one of them. Who was the woman who came and visited in the hospital when Angel was there? Did I miss something or was it a nurse?
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I love to read your work. Snakes and panthers in your story brings wildlife to life (creatures). Although, I would not like to be bit by either one of them. Who was the woman who came and visited in the hospital when Angel was there? Did I miss something or was it a nurse?
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Rosemary!
The "Exceptional Review" is an honor. Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to read our work. Cathy and I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day, and may God bless you with many more to come. Best wishes for an awesome weekend, our dear friend.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from patcelaw
Bill, I wish you and Cathy the best on the book. She did a great job with the cover. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Bill, I wish you and Cathy the best on the book. She did a great job with the cover. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Patricia!
Cathy and I thank you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. May your weekend be blessed too. Great hearing from you, our dear friend.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The story is well written regarding Angel's placement to help you on your journey and the special feelings you have for each other. However, I found the paragraph after she wakes up and thanks God for the blessing of life, totally unrelated. There should be a transition from the hospital to wherever you are, under the Star of David. It doesn't seem to connect.
I have revised my rating. Yes, your edit is good.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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The story is well written regarding Angel's placement to help you on your journey and the special feelings you have for each other. However, I found the paragraph after she wakes up and thanks God for the blessing of life, totally unrelated. There should be a transition from the hospital to wherever you are, under the Star of David. It doesn't seem to connect.
I have revised my rating. Yes, your edit is good.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Raffaelina!
Thanks for your thoughts. Cathy and I agree with you, so we're making an edit. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hi to the two of you. Certainly, a lot is going on in this chapter but I also think I've read it all before? Am I mistaken? Anyway, I will be looking out for the next chapter. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi to the two of you. Certainly, a lot is going on in this chapter but I also think I've read it all before? Am I mistaken? Anyway, I will be looking out for the next chapter. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Ulla!
Great hearing from you. Cathy and I extend our thanks for the review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
I enjoyed reading this piece. There is so much action going on and at the same time we are allowed to share in the thoughts and prayers of the characters as they go through a life threatening ordeal. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading this piece. There is so much action going on and at the same time we are allowed to share in the thoughts and prayers of the characters as they go through a life threatening ordeal. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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A "SALUTE," Louise!
Cathy and I thank you for the review, kind words, and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
