Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 98 "Life "Eclectic mix
9 total reviews
Comment from Bicpen
Its Good ...
it reads well with a little mastery of the line and delivers a solid message with a great sense of loss of youth and regret with a gathering of older wisdom of a life torn it hints at the stuffing knocked out of you since now you are the great sage ...
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Its Good ...
it reads well with a little mastery of the line and delivers a solid message with a great sense of loss of youth and regret with a gathering of older wisdom of a life torn it hints at the stuffing knocked out of you since now you are the great sage ...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Stuffing was kicked out several ways, like others, but the updated view is more able. Thanks
Hugs, Trisha,
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Stuffing was kicked out several ways, like others, but the updated view is more able. Thanks
Hugs, Trisha,
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well so long as your in good hands ...
Comment from royowen
I think you could have written this for me, but even now I'm still a fool in some areas. But I do know a lot more than I did when I was young. A little less foolish perhaps. I really liked this post, it suits down to the ground. Beautifully written free verse, so wise in many ways. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I think you could have written this for me, but even now I'm still a fool in some areas. But I do know a lot more than I did when I was young. A little less foolish perhaps. I really liked this post, it suits down to the ground. Beautifully written free verse, so wise in many ways. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Roy, you?re such a ?warm? reviewer. Thanks for a great review,
Hugs, Trisha
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Bless youn
Comment from Gideon300
I remember reading Dante's Purgatory and a particular point when the sinner converts only on his death bed he has to wait at the foot of the mountain to even get into Purgatory because he made God wait so now he must wait. Your poem reminds me of a life a little bit like that. And it makes you think. - Brenda
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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I remember reading Dante's Purgatory and a particular point when the sinner converts only on his death bed he has to wait at the foot of the mountain to even get into Purgatory because he made God wait so now he must wait. Your poem reminds me of a life a little bit like that. And it makes you think. - Brenda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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That?s great that I have written ?food for thought?, thanks so much, hugs, Trisha
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That?s great that I have written ?food for thought?, thanks so much, hugs, Trisha
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this meaningful piece. Sounds like you are too hard on yourself. Some people are lucky and are instilled with a high self-esteem by loving parents and some are not so lucky. Sounds like life has thrown a lot of mayhem your way and you've endured and made the best of it like a champ. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Congratulations on this meaningful piece. Sounds like you are too hard on yourself. Some people are lucky and are instilled with a high self-esteem by loving parents and some are not so lucky. Sounds like life has thrown a lot of mayhem your way and you've endured and made the best of it like a champ. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Yes I have, and now it?s time to find the authentic me!. Thanks for your very kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
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Yes I have, and now it?s time to find the authentic me!. Thanks for your very kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful look back at choices made and lots of today.... the mention of children being one reason you endured us a testimony to your hidden strength... ð??? Thank you for sharing and best of luck! Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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What a wonderful look back at choices made and lots of today.... the mention of children being one reason you endured us a testimony to your hidden strength... ð??? Thank you for sharing and best of luck! Yvette
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Yes, I?m the Iron Lady LOL, thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think we all find more sense as we age, trouble is we could do with some of it at an earlier age. An unusual rhyming poem Trisha, with your non rhyming lines in between the couplets. You're right, life is too short not to love yourself, so that others can too. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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I think we all find more sense as we age, trouble is we could do with some of it at an earlier age. An unusual rhyming poem Trisha, with your non rhyming lines in between the couplets. You're right, life is too short not to love yourself, so that others can too. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Hi valda thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a very different rhyming piece but with the addition of the non rhyming words and lines, it added punctuation to what you are trying to say. Nicely done
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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What a very different rhyming piece but with the addition of the non rhyming words and lines, it added punctuation to what you are trying to say. Nicely done
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Diversity is good! Thanks so much
Hugs Trisha
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! Its an interestering and intriguing poem that shares what would happen if you had made different choices.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! Its an interestering and intriguing poem that shares what would happen if you had made different choices.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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What a great review you honor me with! Thanks so much Rebekka,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha