Grocery Store Surprise
Went grocery shopping, met a man, together 15 yrs later.29 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oh, wow! That's an incredible story in such few words. Who would have thought. lol.This is a great entry. Good luck, my friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Oh, wow! That's an incredible story in such few words. Who would have thought. lol.This is a great entry. Good luck, my friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, Kerry. 15 yrs later he is still the most wonderful man on earth!
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That's so sweet:))
Comment from Ricky1024
"Grocery Store Surprise"
Is a 3 Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Grocery Manager Surprise?
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I met my first girlfriend (Susan)
In a Foodtown where I was the Grocery Manager.
She was a cashier and at age Twenty?
I wasn't ready for marriage so, that didn't eork.
But many, many, years later, I met my future wife (Carolyn)
On a blind date.
She would shop in my store and she became my wife!
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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"Grocery Store Surprise"
Is a 3 Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Grocery Manager Surprise?
....
I met my first girlfriend (Susan)
In a Foodtown where I was the Grocery Manager.
She was a cashier and at age Twenty?
I wasn't ready for marriage so, that didn't eork.
But many, many, years later, I met my future wife (Carolyn)
On a blind date.
She would shop in my store and she became my wife!
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 3 line poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have told a well written story about how you met your man. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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This is a great entry for the 3 line poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have told a well written story about how you met your man. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much Heather!
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Sounds like an idle, er.. i mean, isle romance.
I thought this was cute and classy. Using your own experience to create a cute romantic prose.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Sounds like an idle, er.. i mean, isle romance.
I thought this was cute and classy. Using your own experience to create a cute romantic prose.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bichon
A very sweet poem. Even though it's short, you documented the meeting perfectly and summed it up with the final line precisely. I am happy you have found each other.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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A very sweet poem. Even though it's short, you documented the meeting perfectly and summed it up with the final line precisely. I am happy you have found each other.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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And still in love 15 years later! I truly found a prince in the grocery store.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the meeting at a grocery store that ends up in a lifetime relationship. I met my first boyfriend in a grocery store two years after we danced at my cousin's wedding. The relationship ended after two years.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about the meeting at a grocery store that ends up in a lifetime relationship. I met my first boyfriend in a grocery store two years after we danced at my cousin's wedding. The relationship ended after two years.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Then he just wasn?t the right one. I lucked out.
Comment from padumachitta
hello this is a wonderful wee entry for the 3 line contest.
It made me smile, the diet coke was a great touch.
Guess you found him in the beverage isle:-)
You said all the necessisary things to promote a love story, and now we will all wonder if it is true..
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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hello this is a wonderful wee entry for the 3 line contest.
It made me smile, the diet coke was a great touch.
Guess you found him in the beverage isle:-)
You said all the necessisary things to promote a love story, and now we will all wonder if it is true..
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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It is 100% true and we are still as happy as can be. We met 15 years ago!
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:-)
Comment from Minglement
I enjoyed this entry for this contest. So simple but tells a sweet story of romance and long lasting love from a chance meeting. I thought at first this was an entry for how I met my valentine. Appropriate for either ;) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for this contest. So simple but tells a sweet story of romance and long lasting love from a chance meeting. I thought at first this was an entry for how I met my valentine. Appropriate for either ;) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Joan E.
Ah--you too have a special, love-at-first-sight story! I enjoyed your title and happy ending in this 3-Line Poem. The artwork you selected helped to establish the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Ah--you too have a special, love-at-first-sight story! I enjoyed your title and happy ending in this 3-Line Poem. The artwork you selected helped to establish the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from pome lover
that is a charming story told simply and succinctly ~
Certainly a fantasy for many females who frequent the grocery store.
It made me smile. Good for you. Good for you both.
A delightful three line poem.
pome lover
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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that is a charming story told simply and succinctly ~
Certainly a fantasy for many females who frequent the grocery store.
It made me smile. Good for you. Good for you both.
A delightful three line poem.
pome lover
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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15 yes later- still in love!
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bless you both!
