Happy Children
A 5-7-9 contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. Every child deserves to be happy, joyous and free. I like this sweet poem and the image to accompany it. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Hi Christine. Every child deserves to be happy, joyous and free. I like this sweet poem and the image to accompany it. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Hi Marilyn Thanks and it was lovely to hear the kids laughing as I was walking past with my dog Bonnie they made me smile and think of the innocence in children just enjoying their life Cheers Chris
Comment from Bicpen
Filled with a embracing quality with a good enjoyment of tone with a very present sentiment. It speaks a volume with a deliberate and exciting tone whereby it has a clear definition and freedom of expression.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Filled with a embracing quality with a good enjoyment of tone with a very present sentiment. It speaks a volume with a deliberate and exciting tone whereby it has a clear definition and freedom of expression.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Hi Bicpen Thank you for your review and kind words for my poem . I enjoyed hearing the childrens laughter in the moment event .Many Cheers and have a great day Cheers Christine
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Mystery Writer. Your well constructed poem speaks of the noises of children playing. We live in times when they should have many opportunities to play. That's where their early learning is done.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Mystery Writer. Your well constructed poem speaks of the noises of children playing. We live in times when they should have many opportunities to play. That's where their early learning is done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Robert Thanks for your review and yes it is always pleasing to hear the kids laugh and it made me smile. So did gaining a third place for this poem Cheers Christine
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You're welcome
Comment from June Sargent
That's one of the signs of summer - children playing outside with joy and laughter. Symphonies of happiness- what a great image! Music to our ears in a world that's too involved with tapping on devices. Great little piece for the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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That's one of the signs of summer - children playing outside with joy and laughter. Symphonies of happiness- what a great image! Music to our ears in a world that's too involved with tapping on devices. Great little piece for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi June. Thanks for reading my poem and yes summer is an outside time except when it is 40 degree like today and tomorrow here. I am pleased you like my images in this poem and I was pleased to gain a third place for it . Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree that children are often naturally happy and hearing their laughter is a tonic, your poem brought their fun giggles here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I so agree that children are often naturally happy and hearing their laughter is a tonic, your poem brought their fun giggles here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Dolly, Thanks so much and I am glad you enjoyed my effort and I am happy to say it gained a third so that made me smile Cheers Chris
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-9 poem about the happiness of children is a joy to see when they are laughing carefree in play. Their laughter is a song ringing in our ears remembering our own childhood.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-9 poem about the happiness of children is a joy to see when they are laughing carefree in play. Their laughter is a song ringing in our ears remembering our own childhood.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Sandra, Thanks very much and yes it is always nice to hear the kids laugh and it does bring back childhood memories. I was pleased to gain a third place for my poem Cheers Chris
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like your wordplay and metaphors. This a very uplifting poem. The image appeals to several senses. The reader is invited to reflect upon their experience as a child and their impression of happy carefree children. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I like your wordplay and metaphors. This a very uplifting poem. The image appeals to several senses. The reader is invited to reflect upon their experience as a child and their impression of happy carefree children. Well expressed.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Liz, Thanks for your review and I am pleased you liked my metaphors and word play and I am also happy to have gained a third place for this one Cheers Christine
Comment from zanya
Yes It's so true and what a joyful sound children make as they explore and learn more about their world -thanks for sharing this lovely sentiment and a nice visual
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Yes It's so true and what a joyful sound children make as they explore and learn more about their world -thanks for sharing this lovely sentiment and a nice visual
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Zanya. Thank so much and Pleased to say I gained a third place in the contest. Kids laughing always lifts ones spirits Cheers Christine
Comment from Minglement
I so agree with the sentiment expressed here. I love the subject and the happy flavor of this work. Well done, no suggestions for improvement. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I so agree with the sentiment expressed here. I love the subject and the happy flavor of this work. Well done, no suggestions for improvement. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi Minglement, Thanks for your review and I am pleased to tell you I gained a third place for my effort that made me smile. Cheers Christine
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Congrats! Well done ;)
Comment from Therese Caron
There is nothing like the sound of happy children. I love the phrase children's symphonies. This a wonderful 5-7-9 poem. You picked a marvelous image to accompany your writing. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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There is nothing like the sound of happy children. I love the phrase children's symphonies. This a wonderful 5-7-9 poem. You picked a marvelous image to accompany your writing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hi Theresa Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed my musical take of the children Cheers
