The Date
No adjectives story contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
OMG I was in tears the whole read. This is the funniest! So good! I laughed out loud so hard. This is such a six-er. Brilliant. It brightened my day. Made my life so. You are a writer. Keep writing such work. LOL LOL
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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OMG I was in tears the whole read. This is the funniest! So good! I laughed out loud so hard. This is such a six-er. Brilliant. It brightened my day. Made my life so. You are a writer. Keep writing such work. LOL LOL
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Marilyn. Yeah, I had to give this some thought so it would end up coming out funny. I'm glad you had a chuckle out of this silliness. Have a great day. Thank you again, M.
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Comment from Barbaraj1
You wrote a very clever story. You let your reader fill in the adjectives.
This contest was a challenge. It's hard to write a story without using adjectives. You did a good job.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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You wrote a very clever story. You let your reader fill in the adjectives.
This contest was a challenge. It's hard to write a story without using adjectives. You did a good job.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Barbara. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Words such as 'the' and 'a' and 'an' are all adjectives.... :( So are 'my' and 'your' and 'her'.... Good try, though! ;) :) I would be happy to re-review when you've had a chance to look it over... :) Best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Words such as 'the' and 'a' and 'an' are all adjectives.... :( So are 'my' and 'your' and 'her'.... Good try, though! ;) :) I would be happy to re-review when you've had a chance to look it over... :) Best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I'll have to look into that. Words that describe a noun are adjectives. The, a, an, my, your and her aren't describing a noun. I'm not sure what grammar they are but I don't think they're adjectives. I'm not sure though, I could be wrong. Thanks for the review and heads up, Yvette. Again, I'll have to look into all that.
Comment from Sallyo
I believe cheap and popcorn are both adjectives! Apart from that this was an extraordinary story. I've read a few for this contest and this was the first one that simply REMOVED adjectives rather than working around so they weren't needed.
The five is for the original concept!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I believe cheap and popcorn are both adjectives! Apart from that this was an extraordinary story. I've read a few for this contest and this was the first one that simply REMOVED adjectives rather than working around so they weren't needed.
The five is for the original concept!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Sallyo. I went and changed those mistakes. I appreciate the help. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
