Doctor's Final Exam (fantasy)
The Dentist went to the wrong lab for finals26 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An amusing poem in this fantasy form, about the student who ended up in the wrong room. Me thinks he should have spoken up earlier lol
enjoyed it
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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An amusing poem in this fantasy form, about the student who ended up in the wrong room. Me thinks he should have spoken up earlier lol
enjoyed it
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Valda, thank you, it was just a little humorous creation thrown out to create smiles.
Comment from Bill Schott
This Fantasy poem, Doctor's Final Exam, fulfills the formatting for this poetic framework which I haven't seen before. It's a unique situation that the poem covers as well.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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This Fantasy poem, Doctor's Final Exam, fulfills the formatting for this poetic framework which I haven't seen before. It's a unique situation that the poem covers as well.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Bill, thanks for reviewing and commenting!
Comment from Patty Palmer
That's pretty funny that the to-become dentist went into the wrong lab to take his/her final exam. I can imagine what he thought when he realized what happened.
Funny but I bet it wasn't funny to him
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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That's pretty funny that the to-become dentist went into the wrong lab to take his/her final exam. I can imagine what he thought when he realized what happened.
Funny but I bet it wasn't funny to him
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Patty, Thanks for the validation and comments.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Doctor's Final Exam", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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"Doctor's Final Exam", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Duchess, WOW! Thanks for the validation and comments.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello JLR
I'm glad that I'm not the poor patient it seems to me the doctor has the wrong operating tools.
I noticed you kept track of how many syllables in your post
I'm sure you counted them. I know that I won't count them.
Too much work.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Hello JLR
I'm glad that I'm not the poor patient it seems to me the doctor has the wrong operating tools.
I noticed you kept track of how many syllables in your post
I'm sure you counted them. I know that I won't count them.
Too much work.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Gert,Thanks for the validation and comments.
Comment from nomi338
This poem reminded me of the time I worked at a medical school as security. I was sometime required to turn off the lights in the Gross Anatomy lab, which entailed walking a distance from the light switch to the door in complete darkness unless you had your required flashlight. Under normal circumstances it was not so bad, but sometimes a cadaver or two would not be closed up inside the body bags as they were supposed to be. Imagine a security guard walking among unsecured, partially dissected cadavers in complete darkness. It could be pretty unnerving at best.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This poem reminded me of the time I worked at a medical school as security. I was sometime required to turn off the lights in the Gross Anatomy lab, which entailed walking a distance from the light switch to the door in complete darkness unless you had your required flashlight. Under normal circumstances it was not so bad, but sometimes a cadaver or two would not be closed up inside the body bags as they were supposed to be. Imagine a security guard walking among unsecured, partially dissected cadavers in complete darkness. It could be pretty unnerving at best.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Wow there is a definite story lurking in this commentary. thanks for sharing Nomi!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
The instruments do tell me a lot, still they scare me.i have seen scalpel and drill at work on myself and others.
It is a good joke but very serious at the back.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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The instruments do tell me a lot, still they scare me.i have seen scalpel and drill at work on myself and others.
It is a good joke but very serious at the back.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Benny, thanks for the review
Comment from rjuselius
This is a rather interestering and entertaining piece of poetry dear jlr! The poetry format is new to me but I appreciate the use.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is a rather interestering and entertaining piece of poetry dear jlr! The poetry format is new to me but I appreciate the use.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Rebekka, thanks for the review, the blessings and of course, the hugs!
Comment from Cindy Warren
Imagine a dentist in the wrong lab! The poor fellow would faint. What's he going to do with a cadaver? Check his teeth? Tho I imagine some of them might need dental work. LOL
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Imagine a dentist in the wrong lab! The poor fellow would faint. What's he going to do with a cadaver? Check his teeth? Tho I imagine some of them might need dental work. LOL
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Just a fun pun.
Comment from Gail Denham
Interesting form - I do hope that was a dead body the "doctor" was carving on. And not your annual physical. Altho some tests are pretty intrusive I must admit. well done with this form.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Interesting form - I do hope that was a dead body the "doctor" was carving on. And not your annual physical. Altho some tests are pretty intrusive I must admit. well done with this form.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Smiling Back!
