Tears In A Bottle
A Free verse poem...10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I see that we had an alternate tanka at the ready.... or that we had to choose from...?! ;) :) Loved this one, too, although I'm glad you went with the 'passionate' one! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I see that we had an alternate tanka at the ready.... or that we had to choose from...?! ;) :) Loved this one, too, although I'm glad you went with the 'passionate' one! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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LoL! I think this one has a few too many syllables to be a true tanka! Glad you enjoyed my sad little piece! xoxo
Comment from Ronni
Hi Diana,
Wow, the very title and pic here is instantly haunting and aching,
sad it is indeed how some events in our lives could fill many a
bottle of our futile tears, if not wells or oceans! Either way, no
matter the amount of tears, where they fall, or land, we are never
the same afterwards. Quite relateable indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Love the music tune! Perfect for mood and theme.
Blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Diana,
Wow, the very title and pic here is instantly haunting and aching,
sad it is indeed how some events in our lives could fill many a
bottle of our futile tears, if not wells or oceans! Either way, no
matter the amount of tears, where they fall, or land, we are never
the same afterwards. Quite relateable indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Love the music tune! Perfect for mood and theme.
Blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Yes, oceans for sure over a lifetime! Thanks for your always supportive review! xoxoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This is one of those postings that really touches readers and causes us to ponder further about certain past unhappy events that might still be affecting our lives today in negative ways. Some things might never be erased from memory, but we can move toward any ongoing affect that is detrimental. This is a short poem, but still powerful.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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This is one of those postings that really touches readers and causes us to ponder further about certain past unhappy events that might still be affecting our lives today in negative ways. Some things might never be erased from memory, but we can move toward any ongoing affect that is detrimental. This is a short poem, but still powerful.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you feel that power! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"Tears in a Bottle"
Beautiful tis Thee.
Unfortunately sometimes things don't work out the way we want and we cry so many endless tears enough to fill an ocean
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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"Tears in a Bottle"
Beautiful tis Thee.
Unfortunately sometimes things don't work out the way we want and we cry so many endless tears enough to fill an ocean
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
..
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Boy oh boy! Crying an ocean is exactly right! Thank you so much for your kind review! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
Beautiful. This music has a heavely sound to it as if I'm there right now. Nice and long, too. The Lord captures our tears and makes then His. As always, I am loving this one as much as all the others. I apologize for no six, as it is worthy, dear poetress. :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Beautiful. This music has a heavely sound to it as if I'm there right now. Nice and long, too. The Lord captures our tears and makes then His. As always, I am loving this one as much as all the others. I apologize for no six, as it is worthy, dear poetress. :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Yes he does! And recycled them into flowing rivers of life! No apology my friend, you?re appreciate is worth more than gold! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Tears in a bottle is a captivating feeling within your poem. Have you ever watched the movie, Message In a Bottle? It's such a touching story about a couple who in the end lost each other.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Tears in a bottle is a captivating feeling within your poem. Have you ever watched the movie, Message In a Bottle? It's such a touching story about a couple who in the end lost each other.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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No but I?m going to have to search for it! Thanks for mentioning! xoxo
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the picture you picked to go with this piece. It makes me sad taking me back to a time when my heart was broken and all I could do was cry till there were no more tears left to come out.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I love the picture you picked to go with this piece. It makes me sad taking me back to a time when my heart was broken and all I could do was cry till there were no more tears left to come out.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for appreciating! I try to write to move others and grateful for your feedback! xoxo
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well you go girl! This is a lovely write with all those T sounds. A unique way to present an idea as well. I'm listening to the Weekend while reviewing and writing tonight. I'll stop and listen to yours cause I love it when an author gives a reader a full experience. Night and sweet dreams.
xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Well you go girl! This is a lovely write with all those T sounds. A unique way to present an idea as well. I'm listening to the Weekend while reviewing and writing tonight. I'll stop and listen to yours cause I love it when an author gives a reader a full experience. Night and sweet dreams.
xoxo deborah
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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He is quite the unique artist! Glad to hear your writing!! And thank you for appreciating this! Your day is my night, is that right?
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Mostly yes. I go back on Tuesday. Currently in Michigan xx d
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Oh geez, where in Michigan? I am at state line of Michigan and Indiana!
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Grosse Point Park lol ... I sold my car in anticipation of going back to New Zealand. I have a food truck I want to put to work. xx
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So you?re about 8 or so hours from me! A food truck? To take back to New Zealand? :)
Comment from pharp
You have done an excellent job in the penning of this free verse "Tear is a Jar." Perfect artwork for the words you have penned. I found this to be a most enjoyable read and the message is well received.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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You have done an excellent job in the penning of this free verse "Tear is a Jar." Perfect artwork for the words you have penned. I found this to be a most enjoyable read and the message is well received.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you my dear! Your appreciation for this is most treasured! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write Diana and certainly describes sorrow with all its accompanying tears. I'm not sure I would want to preserve them in a bottle as I would rather they dry quickly, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This is a sad write Diana and certainly describes sorrow with all its accompanying tears. I'm not sure I would want to preserve them in a bottle as I would rather they dry quickly, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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It?s kind of a spiritual thing as the bottle is given to God who will one day wipe all our tears away. I got a fee bottle saved up over my many years on this earth! Ha! Thank you always! xoxo
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My bottle would be overflowing if I had saved all my tears Diana! I have shed so many over the years. Love Dolly x
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The beauty of your work can only be a result of such deep emotions. Hopefully you have also know the heights of joy as well. xoxo
