Love and Gray Skies
A 20 syllable poem...18 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"Love and Grey Skies"
Is a 20 Syllable Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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"Love and Grey Skies"
Is a 20 Syllable Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
..
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
..
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks Doc! :) appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Comment from Patty Palmer
You did well h o make a 20 syllable poem! I don't know about you but this 20 stuff could get old real fast! But then again, it's keeping all of us busy having something to write for every day. I admit it's keeping me busy! LOL Anyway, I like your poem and the picture you chose enhances the poem well.
Hope you have a great day!
Patty
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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You did well h o make a 20 syllable poem! I don't know about you but this 20 stuff could get old real fast! But then again, it's keeping all of us busy having something to write for every day. I admit it's keeping me busy! LOL Anyway, I like your poem and the picture you chose enhances the poem well.
Hope you have a great day!
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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LoL! Thank you so much! 20 syllables is a challenge for sure! I can?t wait to see how the year unfolds coming up with ?20? ideas! Appreciate your kind review! xoxo
Comment from Mastery
Excellent poetry here, Diana. It touches the heart and is emotionally charged from beginning to end. You made excellent use of all twenty syllables. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner. :) Bob
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Excellent poetry here, Diana. It touches the heart and is emotionally charged from beginning to end. You made excellent use of all twenty syllables. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner. :) Bob
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you Bob! Appreciate your encouraging and kind words! xoxo
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XO :) Bob
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Diana, I sure know what this one is about. You've done a remarkable job in 20 syllables! So sad though goodness gracious. I just sigh when I read this kind of piece cause I just know how it feels. Good luck in your contest my friend. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Hi Diana, I sure know what this one is about. You've done a remarkable job in 20 syllables! So sad though goodness gracious. I just sigh when I read this kind of piece cause I just know how it feels. Good luck in your contest my friend. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you sincerely! Me, too, but thankfully I only draw from experience, not from currently experiencing. Too many gray skies in my life, so now I try to enjoy blue skies with the many children, grand children and great grandchildren I have. xoxo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest.
This short verse tells of the far away look in a lover's eyes.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest.
This short verse tells of the far away look in a lover's eyes.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you Sharon! Appreciate your kind words of encouragement! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
Excellent work with your 20 syllables. Nice use of rhyme in it. It sounds as if storm clouds are gathering over this romance. That faraway look is a giveaway. It's natural to have reservations about a relationship, so one has a right to give it careful consideration and maybe second thoughts. judi
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Excellent work with your 20 syllables. Nice use of rhyme in it. It sounds as if storm clouds are gathering over this romance. That faraway look is a giveaway. It's natural to have reservations about a relationship, so one has a right to give it careful consideration and maybe second thoughts. judi
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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thanks Judi! I guess when someone's heart is waning, you can sense the distance. thanks for your precious feedback! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ahhhh.... when love begins to fade.. A wonderful focus for your 20-syll offering, my friend and an excellent pic to accompany!! ;) Hard to evoke much emotion in only twenty, but you do an awesome job! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Ahhhh.... when love begins to fade.. A wonderful focus for your 20-syll offering, my friend and an excellent pic to accompany!! ;) Hard to evoke much emotion in only twenty, but you do an awesome job! :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you!!!! Did i ever tell you I'm an empath! lol! or maybe its just life experience! haha! xoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, touching poem vividly describes that far-away look in those eyes that once reflected love--a now-different look that says things aren't right! The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This lovely, touching poem vividly describes that far-away look in those eyes that once reflected love--a now-different look that says things aren't right! The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks Janice! appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This brief 20-syllable poem has an element of mystery with the combination of love, gray skies (perhaps a quiet, overcast mood of longing) and a far away look. This kind of suggested someone who is in love with someone at a distance. Thanks for posting a cool combination of elements.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This brief 20-syllable poem has an element of mystery with the combination of love, gray skies (perhaps a quiet, overcast mood of longing) and a far away look. This kind of suggested someone who is in love with someone at a distance. Thanks for posting a cool combination of elements.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for appreciating! It was not easy as it looks to be to come up with 20 syllables and still make sense! haha! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Excellent writing. Love the idea that when we get older that the surroundings are gray sometimes like the color of our hair. Also our eyesight gets that far away look when you're are trying to see up close. (Like threading a needle)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Excellent writing. Love the idea that when we get older that the surroundings are gray sometimes like the color of our hair. Also our eyesight gets that far away look when you're are trying to see up close. (Like threading a needle)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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haha! you are too cute! appreciate your awesome comments this morning! my day will be a whole lot brighter! :) xoxoxo
