Reflection in Time
Looking back...20 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation, Diana. I like the color scheme and the picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words flow smoothly with great rhymes and end with a great message. There is much meaning to your poem for all. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is a great presentation, Diana. I like the color scheme and the picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words flow smoothly with great rhymes and end with a great message. There is much meaning to your poem for all. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Your kind words are so appreciated! I always see pics with older woman looking into a mirror and seeing younger woman, so this really grabbed my attention! :) xoxo
Comment from LisaMay
As we grow older, reflecting on our lives and what was important, what message of value we could pass on, having a loving heart and spirit is surely the most important one. Your poem is an interesting way to show this, as an image in a mirror... past, present, and future blending.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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As we grow older, reflecting on our lives and what was important, what message of value we could pass on, having a loving heart and spirit is surely the most important one. Your poem is an interesting way to show this, as an image in a mirror... past, present, and future blending.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yes totally agree! The picture just captured me! Thanks for enjoying! xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
In the end, the only thing that matters is whether we loved and were loved in return. That is the whole reason for living. Everything else is just window dressing. This lovely piece gave is much to ponder.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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In the end, the only thing that matters is whether we loved and were loved in return. That is the whole reason for living. Everything else is just window dressing. This lovely piece gave is much to ponder.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Awesome June! I too think that love is truly the reason for our existence! Thanks for taking time to read! xoxo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
If only we could all just love ourselves a little bit more. I sometimes think we get so caught in things we forget how amazing we are and how we take ourselves for granted. Hmmm I wonder if the older me is in the mirror I look into and what she looks like and has to say.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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If only we could all just love ourselves a little bit more. I sometimes think we get so caught in things we forget how amazing we are and how we take ourselves for granted. Hmmm I wonder if the older me is in the mirror I look into and what she looks like and has to say.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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:). I believe that if you can?t love yourself, how can you possibly love anyone else! Loving others comes from your own loving spirit! So happy you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, Diana.
-Nice profile picture, too!
-This is a lovely poem with
effective imagery and messages
from the older self to the younger self.
-There is a very smooth flow of
ideas with good meter and rhyme.
-The concluding verse is very
heartfelt, and an excellent way
to end the poem.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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-Good image and
presentation, Diana.
-Nice profile picture, too!
-This is a lovely poem with
effective imagery and messages
from the older self to the younger self.
-There is a very smooth flow of
ideas with good meter and rhyme.
-The concluding verse is very
heartfelt, and an excellent way
to end the poem.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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So appreciate your lovely feedback! And thank you for your compliment on profile pic! This was in October when my 5th grandchild arrived. I also have 3 great grandkids! Ha! xoxo
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You are very welcome on both counts and congrats on all of the grand children!
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Thank you! xoxo
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You are welcome:)
Comment from Joan E.
What fascinating and parallel artwork you selected to accent your words! I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and focus on love. Well done and thank you for sharing your reflections- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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What fascinating and parallel artwork you selected to accent your words! I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and focus on love. Well done and thank you for sharing your reflections- Joan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks very much! The picture really spoke to me! Happy you appreciated! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"Reflection in Time"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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When I looked at your picture and then read the words.
I think when it comes to women...
Can the aging process be slowed?
There are skin enhancing creams.
There's dye to cover our Gray.
But Unfortunately, these are only temporary Band-Aids.
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If you ever look at a person, especially a male who's well advanced in age...
You'll notice that sometimes the eyes are crestfallen, the fingernails are different looking thick,
There will be very little hair left and teeth.
And quite possibly the facilities.
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The ears have a long enlongnated, it will be here coming out from the nose and the ears.
The person's thoughts will be slower indoor need to use a restroom facilities more often.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed Weekend!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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"Reflection in Time"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
When I looked at your picture and then read the words.
I think when it comes to women...
Can the aging process be slowed?
There are skin enhancing creams.
There's dye to cover our Gray.
But Unfortunately, these are only temporary Band-Aids.
...
If you ever look at a person, especially a male who's well advanced in age...
You'll notice that sometimes the eyes are crestfallen, the fingernails are different looking thick,
There will be very little hair left and teeth.
And quite possibly the facilities.
...
The ears have a long enlongnated, it will be here coming out from the nose and the ears.
The person's thoughts will be slower indoor need to use a restroom facilities more often.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed Weekend!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Many changes happen to women and don?t believe all they say about creams. Anything for companies to make a buck. Yeah there?s hair dye, but the expense of salons is outrageous and do-it-yourself products don?t turn out like they say! So I guess we all still change together.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a wonderful poem When we are young we never think what we'll be like when we get older. Sometimes we have to remember our past to see what the future hold for us.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Such a wonderful poem When we are young we never think what we'll be like when we get older. Sometimes we have to remember our past to see what the future hold for us.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks you so much! The picture spoke to me of looking back from the inside of the mirror. Appreciate you generous stars also! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, if I had a six, my lady, it would be yours... such a beautiful offering that speaks to the heart of all the 'aging' women out here in so many different whispers that at us each day!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Oh, if I had a six, my lady, it would be yours... such a beautiful offering that speaks to the heart of all the 'aging' women out here in so many different whispers that at us each day!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks, my on-a-roll winning friend! Haha! I was going to do reverse but this photo captured me, and so I did it looking out instead it looking in! I?m glad you could relate! xoxo
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an intriguing concept and the picture you chose complements it perfectly. The poem describes an old woman reaching out to her former self. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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This is an intriguing concept and the picture you chose complements it perfectly. The poem describes an old woman reaching out to her former self. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! Appreciate you took time to read and leave your feedback! xoxo
