Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

I like this Ricky. I never understand why you say you are learning to write because I have been reading you for years and you write from the heart every time and this one is no exception. It is lyrical and wonderfully done! happy new year!

xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020

That's because I'm the number one bad boy on this site I've been banned the most in the last time 68 days for cutting and pasting reviews at least that's what mr. Thomas ens said.
the other bands were shorter periods for me defending my work and getting revenge specialist has to do with my son and Gift of Life.
I learned that you can have a choice of just forgiving and forgetting
Or block if it's really bad.
I blocked one person this year who gave me two four star reviews for my poetry that was getting fives and sixes.
The one piece I worked a long time on it was in three parts it was over three thousand words.
Yes, for no good reason.
...
I look at these people as what I call...
'Newbies.'
Basically, they have no basic anything that they offer.
And, we can review and share.
Some of them.
...
I know Lavinia knew Cheryl Mel Woods.
I forget if you knew her but you've been around long time.
I was wondering if anybody has ever had contact with her?
And, C. Lucas the Western Novelist.
I became friends with Charlie in the beginning.
He just Dissapeared?
I hope he hadn't passed like Dean Kuch
And Phyllis Stewart.
...
So we did a lot of sharing back and forth.
And then after a year he told me you're doing exactly what I was doing the first few years.
"Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory."
Thanks my Dear Friend
I'll review you now.
Ricky

Comment from Liberty Justice

Exceptional

SIX STARS 6******Ricky is that you in photo? What a beautiful title and song you've dedicated to some singers who have passed on. Could be a hit record. Read Review mine also. www libertyjusticebooks.com.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Yes, my ugly puss!
But, I can write it...
Dance to it...
Sing it...
And, Blow Everybody away!
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Office properties when Jason passed away in the car accident as a passenger March 31st 2003.
And then on April Fool's Day we donated his organs to save four lives.
...
He had his own band he was a percussionist that man he plays the drums in keyboards and all the little things.
I bought it for him when he was in 6th grade.
...
he first started with his own concerts at the school and he progressed to cut his own music his own CDs.
(Jason's hot s***)
For a buck apiece.
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I should try to take over for him when it comes to the music since I've been getting better and better writing songs.
I write one song for about every hundred regular poems and stories.
...
And there's a good reason why.
The name of his band?
Was exactly what he was supposed to do.
Pass away and go back home to his Heavenly Father.
And the name of his band...
"Four Ways to Save"
His favorite artist Bryan Adams as favorite song Summer of 69.
Even though I have never rewritten it or I have never sung it I have it quite a few times had a dedicated to artist to sing it Live events.
Thanks for the six.
And, the last time I reviewed your work.
I forgot to put a rating on it.
So, when I went back over to do it just now. It won't let me go and send it out!
It keeps on saying you need to rate it.
I'll do one for you little bit but I ran out of sixes.
Ricky

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Great rhyming, the inner line rhymes too.
Favorite lines; Tried and true, sometimes overdue, Music from your heart. and perfection which is lasting more than a while, with just one smile..
Great lines.\

lulube

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Thanks Lulube.
Your always there for me!
And, I say these words in the name of Jesus Christ.
And,
"With Just a Single Smile"
Amen
Ricky

reply by Lulube on 18-Jan-2020

back at cha!

lulube

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Timeless tis Thee, a Gift formed as if, Poetry!
Shining never binding.
Separate but together...
Lasting Forever...

This whole piece and these were the words that stuck in my heart. Very well done...nice smile

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Thanks Barbara.
And, it's funny how we can get into a writing trance and it just pops out so quickly!
I watched a few movies about writers and their "Writer's Block."
I have no idea what that is!
I'm brain dead since 2003 and had several Brain transplants!
(I hope this one takes?)
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky Frankenstein 1024

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Interesting combination of question and answer, near rap and lyricism. I like these lines:
Shining never binding.
Separate but together
There is an unusual music history review here, too, including some favorites like John Denver. Thanks for posting!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Its funny when you start writing sister poems.
Which are two separate ones to add more posts!
And, you're feeling grief.
And, you're educating people about the world.
And, all of a sudden "The Earth is Falling!"
"The Earth is Falling!"
And, something like Death.
The deaths of all those wonderful songwriters!
Comes into your mind!
Thanks CrystieCookie999!
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Comment from Luna J

Excellent

I want to hear this music sung because I'm ready to dance. Beautiful songs, I'm certainly ready to pour the music of my heart on the dance floor. :).

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

I can write it and I can sing it and I can play it and I can dance it!
When I get out on the dance floor at the Hard Rock Hotel and Casino to whatever band.
People take out their cameras or video cell phones and start videoing?
Or taking pictures!
When the band give thanks to the unknown dancer.
I tell them I'm Mister Atlantic City!
Thanks,
Luna J!
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