Scale Squared
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Comment from Gracie619
Thanks for sharing and making a moment in my day to stop and read and reflect on something totally different than my work day. Your work is a gift. I like your rebel coming through in "reminisces." ;)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks for sharing and making a moment in my day to stop and read and reflect on something totally different than my work day. Your work is a gift. I like your rebel coming through in "reminisces." ;)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from bhogg
Victor--I'm not a poet, so can only comment on things I like. Your post is one of those. I loved, "Only the past lingers ever present". Why did I like it? Because for many reasons that has been my world today. Nicely written and beautifully presented!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Victor--I'm not a poet, so can only comment on things I like. Your post is one of those. I loved, "Only the past lingers ever present". Why did I like it? Because for many reasons that has been my world today. Nicely written and beautifully presented!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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How very nice of you. Thank you. Doug
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your reflections about the past with us. I am pleased they are happy memories and also involve your "abstractions and brush". Keep following your creative impulse- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your reflections about the past with us. I am pleased they are happy memories and also involve your "abstractions and brush". Keep following your creative impulse- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Joan.
Comment from Mastery
Good job Doug. In my estimation...one of your best and still much like e. e. cummings. I liked the last few lines in particular of c ourse:
"Happiness resides
within my room
as I sit
with abstractions and brush"
Amen. :) Bob
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Good job Doug. In my estimation...one of your best and still much like e. e. cummings. I liked the last few lines in particular of c ourse:
"Happiness resides
within my room
as I sit
with abstractions and brush"
Amen. :) Bob
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Bob, you are always kind to me. I do believe you are sincere about e. e. cummings. But, Lord, that is a high compliment. Thank you. Doug Semper Fidelis? or did I get it wrong?
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Thanks Doug. Semper Fidelis is correct "always faithful" in Latin
Comment from Drew Delaney
To remember is a wonderful thing. To have good memories is even better. You can change what you decide to change as it is an author's privilege. I like this free verse.
Drew
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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To remember is a wonderful thing. To have good memories is even better. You can change what you decide to change as it is an author's privilege. I like this free verse.
Drew
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Drew.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poem. It is interesting, original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your poem. It is interesting, original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Alyssa Weisbrod
This piece comes across as very powerful. You did an excellent job at truly portraying the past as something not forgotten, at least that's what I got from this poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This piece comes across as very powerful. You did an excellent job at truly portraying the past as something not forgotten, at least that's what I got from this poem. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, Alyssa.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a grime poem but also so delicate painted with stroke of hope and joy :"Happiness resides
within my room
as I sit
with abstractions and brush"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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What a grime poem but also so delicate painted with stroke of hope and joy :"Happiness resides
within my room
as I sit
with abstractions and brush"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Iza.
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. I thought you did a great job and I loved the words "Images
of forlorn order
layer themselves
with dense entropy". Wow, great piece of work.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. I thought you did a great job and I loved the words "Images
of forlorn order
layer themselves
with dense entropy". Wow, great piece of work.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Very nice of you. Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are the author, you do it your way! I liked this poem a lot, you do what you want in the room you love as it is, and that is fine. I love the picture, it goes really well with your poem. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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You are the author, you do it your way! I liked this poem a lot, you do what you want in the room you love as it is, and that is fine. I love the picture, it goes really well with your poem. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. I painted it. Doug
