Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And who doesn't love a great fantasy vision -- lovely!! ;) This is a great offering for this contest... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review, I see troubles like dragons in the path that just have to be shushed away, haha. Cheers.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this creative piece.
To me it says that sometimes, when one is beset my troubling thoughts,
he/she must be rescued.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review, My friend had to go to court and she was worried. I told her to go and slay those dragons that continue to block her path, cheers.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow--after seeing that remarkable picture, how could I not read your 5-7-5? I was intrigued by your idea of "sky dragons" and your alliteration of "s's" for even more intensity. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thanks for the insightful review Jean. My friend was having problems and I told her to slay those dragon milling about her path. Makes it easier to handle , haha. Cheers

reply by Joan E. on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you for sharing a bit of the back story. I hope your friend is doing better. Smiles- Joan

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

She conquered them and loved her poem, cheers.

reply by Joan E. on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you for sharing another positive reaction. Keep up your good works- Joan

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of dragons. The artwork is a beautiful match.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review Sharon. I think of problems like dragons that can be scattered, cheers.