Love By The Fireplace
Passion in action...25 total reviews
Comment from Katelynn Magee
Well written and descriptive. We can all relate to the warmth and comfort of a fireplace. Good luck on the contest you definitely get my vote! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Well written and descriptive. We can all relate to the warmth and comfort of a fireplace. Good luck on the contest you definitely get my vote! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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thanks so much!! i just love a fireplace! appreciate your supportive feedback and sprinkle of starlight! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about love's passion make great use of the cozy setting at the fireplace. An excuse to relax in wintertime because it is too cold to go outside anyway.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about love's passion make great use of the cozy setting at the fireplace. An excuse to relax in wintertime because it is too cold to go outside anyway.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Oh yeah, love a fire in the winter! Thanks for appreciating!! xoxo
Comment from Dancemom
This is a nice entry for the 575 poem contest. I love your picture of the crackling fireplace and your words describe it well. One issue: fireplace is only two syllables, so that line has 6 instead of 7 syllables. I know it sounds like three, and I personally always thought it was until recently. Good job overall.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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This is a nice entry for the 575 poem contest. I love your picture of the crackling fireplace and your words describe it well. One issue: fireplace is only two syllables, so that line has 6 instead of 7 syllables. I know it sounds like three, and I personally always thought it was until recently. Good job overall.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! I assumed that since ?fire? is two syllables, ?fireplace? would be three, but you?re right, it says two! Ha! I?ve corrected it now! Appreciate your help!
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No problem. I changed your stars to a five.
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Thank you very much!! I wish I had reviewer nomination left, but I will remember you when they come around again!
Comment from royowen
I like the play on words of this piece, it seems to be a wonderful metaphoric connection between the two expressions of heat generation. Well done, an excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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I like the play on words of this piece, it seems to be a wonderful metaphoric connection between the two expressions of heat generation. Well done, an excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks Roy! Love a good fire! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
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Me too, except when I put my finger in it,
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Blahaha!!!!
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Heh heh
Comment from Susan Larson
I don't know which ignited more passion, the picture or the poem. Any poem that can stir the emotions like this one is certainly deserving of a win in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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I don't know which ignited more passion, the picture or the poem. Any poem that can stir the emotions like this one is certainly deserving of a win in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you sincerely! Appreciate you enjoyed. Lots of good entries, though! xoxo
