Unforgettable
Hopefully we all have such memories3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Perfect offering to bring in the warmth of summer in more ways than one -- be gone, Winter!! ;) This is a great offering for this contest... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Perfect offering to bring in the warmth of summer in more ways than one -- be gone, Winter!! ;) This is a great offering for this contest... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery that matches the art work very well.
I think many will have similar memories, though maybe not
skinny dipping.
Well done
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery that matches the art work very well.
I think many will have similar memories, though maybe not
skinny dipping.
Well done
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanks much for your read and your review. I did wish to tingle some memorable thoughts.
Comment from RodG
Yes, such a experience with someone you love would be "unforgettable." I like how you set the scene "under a starry canopy" and I assume you are all alone on that beach. It's nice to fantasize with you. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, such a experience with someone you love would be "unforgettable." I like how you set the scene "under a starry canopy" and I assume you are all alone on that beach. It's nice to fantasize with you. Rod
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Your assumption is correct. She would not do it otherwise. Thanks for the read and glad you enjoyed your fantasy.
