Scene at a Pet Store 2
Pons and Ned at a pet store.16 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
It sounds like Pons is more money-oriented, and Ned is more practical-oriented. I like the conversational tone in this script. I think I recognized all the pop culture/animated dog references. Nice share.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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It sounds like Pons is more money-oriented, and Ned is more practical-oriented. I like the conversational tone in this script. I think I recognized all the pop culture/animated dog references. Nice share.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you, CC
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another good Pons and Ned story.
Well told and entertaining.
I look forward to the next part, and seeing what Ned actually gets for a pet.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Another good Pons and Ned story.
Well told and entertaining.
I look forward to the next part, and seeing what Ned actually gets for a pet.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from susand3022
You make me laugh so much, Bill... HuLU-hoop! LOLOL I'm still giggling... You've got such a great sense of humor. I haven't any idea where you come up with such things but I'm sure glad that you do! You're a fantastic entertainer! I wish I still had a 6. :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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You make me laugh so much, Bill... HuLU-hoop! LOLOL I'm still giggling... You've got such a great sense of humor. I haven't any idea where you come up with such things but I'm sure glad that you do! You're a fantastic entertainer! I wish I still had a 6. :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Wow! You're very kind, Susan. Thank you. Bill
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice story and I like talking parrots too:) but a talking puppy, that will be something. The narrative of the story flows easily through dialogue and gives different scenarios and option to follow the threat of the story: talking parrot - checked; talking puppy we narrowed down the breed:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next scene.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Nice story and I like talking parrots too:) but a talking puppy, that will be something. The narrative of the story flows easily through dialogue and gives different scenarios and option to follow the threat of the story: talking parrot - checked; talking puppy we narrowed down the breed:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next scene.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Iza
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written script about Ned and Pons at the pet store. You used very cute dialogue and very good descriptive words. I always enjoy your scripts. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a very cute and very well written script about Ned and Pons at the pet store. You used very cute dialogue and very good descriptive words. I always enjoy your scripts. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Teri.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for the memories--I don't have pets anymore since we live in a condo--but I do have bird feeders to successfully attract the critters. I enjoyed your dialog and use of vernacular, especially "neckativical". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the memories--I don't have pets anymore since we live in a condo--but I do have bird feeders to successfully attract the critters. I enjoyed your dialog and use of vernacular, especially "neckativical". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Joan, for the positivical review. Bill
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I'll have to store your clever expressions for future use. Big smiles- Joan
Comment from judiverse
I'm for Ned getting a dog. There might be something to having a parrot, because I think they live pretty long lives. A dog would give Ned unconditional love regardless of how he pronounces things. (Doesn't everyone say hulahoop?) Pons should get Ned out of that pricey pet shop and take him to an animal shelter. There he would find a dog that would speak to him, asking Ned to take him home. Great interactions between Ned and Ponz. Ponz seems to be humoring Ned at times about the talking parrot but does try to explain that there are no talking dogs. We'll see where this heads, but I hate to see Ned spending a lot of money on some pricey animals when there are so many worthy homeless pets out there. judi
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I'm for Ned getting a dog. There might be something to having a parrot, because I think they live pretty long lives. A dog would give Ned unconditional love regardless of how he pronounces things. (Doesn't everyone say hulahoop?) Pons should get Ned out of that pricey pet shop and take him to an animal shelter. There he would find a dog that would speak to him, asking Ned to take him home. Great interactions between Ned and Ponz. Ponz seems to be humoring Ned at times about the talking parrot but does try to explain that there are no talking dogs. We'll see where this heads, but I hate to see Ned spending a lot of money on some pricey animals when there are so many worthy homeless pets out there. judi
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I?ll take the boys to the animal shelter.
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I was going to write you into the next Pons and Ned scene. Is that okay?
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Do I get to be a pet? Sounds like fun, so count me in. judi
Comment from nomi338
Well it looks like one thing is consistent, Ned is not getting much smarter as time goes by. While he is not the sharpest knife in the drawer, at least he is not a danger to accidentally cut anyone.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Well it looks like one thing is consistent, Ned is not getting much smarter as time goes by. While he is not the sharpest knife in the drawer, at least he is not a danger to accidentally cut anyone.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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The parrot may teach him something.
Comment from Mistydawn
Mr. Peabody, lol I use to watch him and Sherman years ago. Not sure I'd want Brian for a pet. The script is well-written, believable, nice job as always.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Mr. Peabody, lol I use to watch him and Sherman years ago. Not sure I'd want Brian for a pet. The script is well-written, believable, nice job as always.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanks, MD
Comment from lyenochka
Does Ned really want to spend that much money on pets? He'd have to feed and care for them, too. I'm betting that parrot really does know how to talk though. You'll show us. I'm sure!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Does Ned really want to spend that much money on pets? He'd have to feed and care for them, too. I'm betting that parrot really does know how to talk though. You'll show us. I'm sure!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Maybe Ned will be the pet.
