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A question from a longing heat.
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Comment from
May 1
This poem is so nicely written and so sad. I think everyone can relate to a situation similar to this one. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
Comment from
Minglement
Nice entry for this contest and you caught me off guard with the change of tone in your last line. You got me. Starting off light and slapping the reader right between the eyes with such a sad ending. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
reply by Minglement on 14-Jan-2020
Comment from
Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. This is a sad message about a broken heart, but maybe it is a blessing in disguise. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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