Did They Mean It
My take on the shooting down of the Passenger Jet in Iran53 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Your poem is short and succinct. "Intent" is not at the heart of the matter, though politicians would make it so... You so rightfully remind us that the many innocent, unsuspecting lost souls--as young as one year of age had their very lives snuffed out by weapons that are only as safe as the fallible humans who manage them-- May they all rest in God's loving arms.--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Your poem is short and succinct. "Intent" is not at the heart of the matter, though politicians would make it so... You so rightfully remind us that the many innocent, unsuspecting lost souls--as young as one year of age had their very lives snuffed out by weapons that are only as safe as the fallible humans who manage them-- May they all rest in God's loving arms.--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I believe that God who thinks so much more of men than he does a mere sparrow, notices when a sparrow falls from he sky.
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I believe?
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Thank you for some very wonderfully thought out and clearly expressed comments.
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My pleasure to read your work!--Karenina
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Bless you.
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Bless you as well.....Karenina
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message conveyed in this. You've laid it out plain so that their is no guesswork by what you mean. I don't see anything good coming from war, just death as you've so eloquently stated. You're also correct about people being afraid to fly. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I like the message conveyed in this. You've laid it out plain so that their is no guesswork by what you mean. I don't see anything good coming from war, just death as you've so eloquently stated. You're also correct about people being afraid to fly. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you kind sir. I appreciate your wonderful review comments.
Comment from Lulube
You spoke your opinion on this crucial matter and that's what is important, stating facts and questionable scenarios.
you just can't believe the first column in the newspaper without listening for more facts. we need to read between the lines. Whats so different from the two towers and this plane brought down? Vengeance with no backbone to own it, capable of anything.
lulube
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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You spoke your opinion on this crucial matter and that's what is important, stating facts and questionable scenarios.
you just can't believe the first column in the newspaper without listening for more facts. we need to read between the lines. Whats so different from the two towers and this plane brought down? Vengeance with no backbone to own it, capable of anything.
lulube
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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With blood stained hands the unmerciful will still try to deny their culpability in brutal acts such as this.
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Deny, deny, deny
lulube
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a simple poem, but the message is conveyed clearly in the words you chose. Acts of war or similar are always tragic and the victims always innocent. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a simple poem, but the message is conveyed clearly in the words you chose. Acts of war or similar are always tragic and the victims always innocent. Keep writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you Susan, I believe that I will. I appreciate your wonderful review comments.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello nomi338I can see by reading your poem. I liked the way you ended your poem about the tragic attack of the missile that killed 169 passengers and the pilot.
People wonder why, some choose not to fly
Too many planes, are falling from the sky .
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello nomi338I can see by reading your poem. I liked the way you ended your poem about the tragic attack of the missile that killed 169 passengers and the pilot.
People wonder why, some choose not to fly
Too many planes, are falling from the sky .
Gert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, the increasing number of planes falling from the sky serve to make many a little skittish about climbing aboard.
Comment from Louise Michelle
I don't think they would deliberately kill Iranians, but the cover up really turned their people against them.
I think you captured the essence in your poem . . . sigh. It's becoming a more dangerous world year by year. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I don't think they would deliberately kill Iranians, but the cover up really turned their people against them.
I think you captured the essence in your poem . . . sigh. It's becoming a more dangerous world year by year. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you Lou, Your words of encouragement reall warm my heart and gives me a solid boost. You are appreciated.
Comment from crzypnter
Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem. So tragic and I fear that they could of been much much worse. People should read their Bible for these times were for told. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem. So tragic and I fear that they could of been much much worse. People should read their Bible for these times were for told. Thank you for sharing this one. God bless
August
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you. The Bible even offer consolation in that there is a hoped for resurrection for the innocent in the very near future.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, will it reach the point that all travel--in the air and on the ground--is consistently unsafe? Your concise poem sends a powerful message about
countries that cause deaths--then basically say "OOPS!"
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, will it reach the point that all travel--in the air and on the ground--is consistently unsafe? Your concise poem sends a powerful message about
countries that cause deaths--then basically say "OOPS!"
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, but I also believe that the hammer of justice will eventually fall where it should. Thank you for your review comments.
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Yes, God is still in charge.
Comment from Alchera
I do like this poem for its thematic subject.
Nine lines have been sufficient to question about nowadays' important problems: plane killing doubts in Iran, people's flying fears, the useless apologies of the warlords and the carelessness of the dead souls shot. A Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I do like this poem for its thematic subject.
Nine lines have been sufficient to question about nowadays' important problems: plane killing doubts in Iran, people's flying fears, the useless apologies of the warlords and the carelessness of the dead souls shot. A Great work.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your concise evaluation of my words. I appreciate every one of your statements
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You Are always welcome? Blessings from Italy. Tony
Comment from kahpot
How true How true, on both counts, if this gets passed off as an accident then murder is accidental, and yes through intent and or neglect way to many planes are falling, an excellent read, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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How true How true, on both counts, if this gets passed off as an accident then murder is accidental, and yes through intent and or neglect way to many planes are falling, an excellent read, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much. I am in full agreement with your comments.
