Green Eyes
Mirroring my deep desire54 total reviews
Comment from dkblack
I have always thought green eyes were lovely! The artwork was just right to match your entry. And how wonderful to look into someone's eyes and see "love' in them! Nicely done!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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I have always thought green eyes were lovely! The artwork was just right to match your entry. And how wonderful to look into someone's eyes and see "love' in them! Nicely done!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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I appreciate your review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, the eyes are almost magical in their power to affect those who gaze into them. You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this very romantic piece.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, the eyes are almost magical in their power to affect those who gaze into them. You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this very romantic piece.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sallyo
I like the way you have repeating vowels that go through the lines. I don't know what that technique is... hidden rhyme? Assonance? But it lifts this from the blandness some of these very short pieces have.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I like the way you have repeating vowels that go through the lines. I don't know what that technique is... hidden rhyme? Assonance? But it lifts this from the blandness some of these very short pieces have.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Sally, Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of Romance Poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
'...reflecting my projected
consuming desire"
Marvelous!
Best of Luck!!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of Romance Poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
'...reflecting my projected
consuming desire"
Marvelous!
Best of Luck!!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Wow, I am so grateful for your six-star review, thank you!
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This certainly seems to fit the writing prompt, with the speaker professing a love for someone's green eyes. As the object of love, it appears the green eyes also serve to reflect back a desire not dissimilar in the level of consuming power. Nice art choice. Good luck with that contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This certainly seems to fit the writing prompt, with the speaker professing a love for someone's green eyes. As the object of love, it appears the green eyes also serve to reflect back a desire not dissimilar in the level of consuming power. Nice art choice. Good luck with that contest!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from kahpot
I like the way you have combined your love for the eyes and the returned love you see from (in) them, (very clever) an excellent 5-7-5 poem for this prompt, best wishes ****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I like the way you have combined your love for the eyes and the returned love you see from (in) them, (very clever) an excellent 5-7-5 poem for this prompt, best wishes ****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Ben Colder
Green eyed lady, a good song back in the 70-80. You did well with this contest entry. I hope you do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Green eyed lady, a good song back in the 70-80. You did well with this contest entry. I hope you do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello writer of Green eyes with the drawing of green eyes staring at me and your few words of how her eyes being green are reflecting my projected consuming desire
only in 5-7-5 words. I wish you the best in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello writer of Green eyes with the drawing of green eyes staring at me and your few words of how her eyes being green are reflecting my projected consuming desire
only in 5-7-5 words. I wish you the best in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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You are welcome Gert
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You are welcome, how did you do in the contest?
Comment from susand3022
Hi Author, I like your 5-7-5 for the I Love contest. It's quite romantic, as is the image of that incredible green eye! I had to check on the syllable count on "desire" (2 or 3?) but you're good!... (I bet you knew that!) lol Good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hi Author, I like your 5-7-5 for the I Love contest. It's quite romantic, as is the image of that incredible green eye! I had to check on the syllable count on "desire" (2 or 3?) but you're good!... (I bet you knew that!) lol Good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a cute short poem and an excellent contest entry. The wording is in keeping with the writing prompt challenge and the picture is a fitting complement to the words.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a cute short poem and an excellent contest entry. The wording is in keeping with the writing prompt challenge and the picture is a fitting complement to the words.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
