Written In Gold
A valentine message...15 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
You should really send this to someone! This is so wonderful. The old time Valentine sets it off and "written in gold", great choice of words for this lovely send off. You have a really awesome way of blending just the right words and sentiments together. Great Job, as usual!
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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You should really send this to someone! This is so wonderful. The old time Valentine sets it off and "written in gold", great choice of words for this lovely send off. You have a really awesome way of blending just the right words and sentiments together. Great Job, as usual!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Awe! If only I had someone to send it to. Alas!!! Glad you enjoyed it though! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
I love the sweet artwork. It's time to start thinking Valentine's Day already! The supermarket where I shop was filled with reminders. Something written in gold has to be valuable. You want the Valentine's Day message to reach the loved one's heart. Hope it does! judi
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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I love the sweet artwork. It's time to start thinking Valentine's Day already! The supermarket where I shop was filled with reminders. Something written in gold has to be valuable. You want the Valentine's Day message to reach the loved one's heart. Hope it does! judi
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Appreciate you enjoyed! I can?t believe they had the Valentine?s Day stuff out before Christmas was over in my local store! Geez already! Haha! It?s like they forget Thanksgiving, too, and skip right from Halloween to Christmas! Ugh! xoxo
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You're welcome. I even saw Easter stuff out at the grocery. judi
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Oh Lord! Too much!!! LoL!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice Valentine wish, with 'd' alliteration noted for "deepest devotion" and half rhyme of 'gold' and 'soul.' I like vintage valentines, too, so nice choice on the art. Cute post!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Nice Valentine wish, with 'd' alliteration noted for "deepest devotion" and half rhyme of 'gold' and 'soul.' I like vintage valentines, too, so nice choice on the art. Cute post!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thanks again! Thought I?d bring a little old-fashion romance that is so missing these days! xoxo
Comment from Gail Denham
How nice - here comes Valentine's Day already. On the news last night, they featured this 104-year-old Marine who wants valentines from everywhere for his scrapbooking notebooks. I will try to find a vintage valentine's day card for him. He looks quite well and active.
I like the simplicity of your poem - not gushy as some valentine's poems are.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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How nice - here comes Valentine's Day already. On the news last night, they featured this 104-year-old Marine who wants valentines from everywhere for his scrapbooking notebooks. I will try to find a vintage valentine's day card for him. He looks quite well and active.
I like the simplicity of your poem - not gushy as some valentine's poems are.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you! How wonderful about this veteran. Did they give an address that the valentines could be sent to? I would love to send since I?m a veteran myself! xoxo
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Yes, actually you can look up his name on Google and the whole story is there - he'll be swamped with cards. His name is Maj Bill White - here's the address: Operation Valentine; Attn: Maj. Bill White USMC - The Oaks at Inglewood; 6725 Inglewood Ave.; Stockton CA 95207.
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awesome, thanks for sharing that! I'll pass around to people at my job too! :)
Comment from Barbaraj1
I did so enjoy reading your Valentine's poem. It's simple but well-written.
The picture is so cute. Goes well with the poem. I wish you good luck in
the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I did so enjoy reading your Valentine's poem. It's simple but well-written.
The picture is so cute. Goes well with the poem. I wish you good luck in
the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I thought I would take us bad to a simpler time when Valentine?s Day was alive with notes in the mail and love was purer. Our young are missing out on the idea of developing new love via snail mail. Appreciate you enjoyed. :) xoxo
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a wonderful poem for Valentine's Day! The words you chose are beautiful, and the old fashioned picture really complements your work. Adding the video was a very good choice and further illustrated your work. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is a wonderful poem for Valentine's Day! The words you chose are beautiful, and the old fashioned picture really complements your work. Adding the video was a very good choice and further illustrated your work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you, I wish our young could know the excitement of snail mail love and a blossoming romance. Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine valentine's message, romantic and loving Diana. A neat simple rhyming poem here and I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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A fine valentine's message, romantic and loving Diana. A neat simple rhyming poem here and I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Snail mail is hardly ever used these days by young lover?s just beginning a romance. To me, they miss out on so much with texts and email! Thank you for appreciating!! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Valentine's poem message for a loved one written in gold letters to let her know of the deepest devotion quickly delivered to a lover's soul.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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A very well-written Valentine's poem message for a loved one written in gold letters to let her know of the deepest devotion quickly delivered to a lover's soul.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you, your feedback is genuinely appreciated!!! xoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Diana, a marvelous Monday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I think you executed well and the syllable count was spot on. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Hello Diana, a marvelous Monday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I think you executed well and the syllable count was spot on. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I wish more of our young people could know the value of snail mail romance! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"Written in Gold"
"Is a 'Valentine Contest Entry.'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Good luck with this and have a great weekend.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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"Written in Gold"
"Is a 'Valentine Contest Entry.'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Good luck with this and have a great weekend.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Thought we needed a little old-fashion romance on this site! :). Hope you are well! xoxo
