In Memory Of Marietta
A very special lady50 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have penned a beautiful poem about Marietta and I am confident that she was a remarkable woman if you deem so. The loss of someone like that is greatly felt.
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You have penned a beautiful poem about Marietta and I am confident that she was a remarkable woman if you deem so. The loss of someone like that is greatly felt.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from padumachitta
hi
what a lovely eulogy for a person you knew and played with. Certainly gave a feel for the dear old gal. Maybe you all will have a few games in the later life.
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hi
what a lovely eulogy for a person you knew and played with. Certainly gave a feel for the dear old gal. Maybe you all will have a few games in the later life.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Jay,
A lovely tribute poem to one who was obviously loved. It reads well but I find that the cadence is here and there erratic - so different to your other works I have read. Maybe you should have a look at this.
Regards
Reg
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Dear Jay,
A lovely tribute poem to one who was obviously loved. It reads well but I find that the cadence is here and there erratic - so different to your other works I have read. Maybe you should have a look at this.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
This is terrific, Jay. I can't remember reading a bowling poem for a while and especially one written with such grace and definition of a kind, outstanding woman who is sorely missed.
Always a pleasure to read your work so many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
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This is terrific, Jay. I can't remember reading a bowling poem for a while and especially one written with such grace and definition of a kind, outstanding woman who is sorely missed.
Always a pleasure to read your work so many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an excellent memorial to your friend Marietta. I enjoyed reading it with its great descriptions of her wit and graciousness. Well written, Jay.
Melissa
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This is an excellent memorial to your friend Marietta. I enjoyed reading it with its great descriptions of her wit and graciousness. Well written, Jay.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Malerie
Very nice tribute to Ms Marietta. Wow, I'm sure she would have been pleased to see these words penned in her honor. Good for her as she pressed her way through prayerfully she has inspired others to keep on rolling.
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Very nice tribute to Ms Marietta. Wow, I'm sure she would have been pleased to see these words penned in her honor. Good for her as she pressed her way through prayerfully she has inspired others to keep on rolling.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a beautiful tribute to honor an obviously special person. There is no greater honor than that of words delivered in memory reflecting the character of someone for the world to see.
Thank you for sharing her story! xoxo
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This is a beautiful tribute to honor an obviously special person. There is no greater honor than that of words delivered in memory reflecting the character of someone for the world to see.
Thank you for sharing her story! xoxo
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is awesome Jay and a fitting ode to a greatly loved person. She sounds like a remarkable woman that I would have loved to meet. It sounds like she made a positive impression on everyone that she encountered. Thanks for sharing this informative, inspirational, and well written work. Well done!
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This is awesome Jay and a fitting ode to a greatly loved person. She sounds like a remarkable woman that I would have loved to meet. It sounds like she made a positive impression on everyone that she encountered. Thanks for sharing this informative, inspirational, and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR
This poem illustrates a woman who treated herself and others well. She must of been amazing to still be bowling past 80. She definately left her mark on a lot of people whom she will probably welcome into the Heaven's bowling league. This has a smooth flow and easy rhymes.
Joan
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JLR
This poem illustrates a woman who treated herself and others well. She must of been amazing to still be bowling past 80. She definately left her mark on a lot of people whom she will probably welcome into the Heaven's bowling league. This has a smooth flow and easy rhymes.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from nomi338
There are many remarkable seniors in our lives that leave an indelible mark in our lives and memories. It is fitting to memorialize them in word and whenever possible through poetry. I am sure that if she could hear you, she would undoubtedly give you the biggest smile of approval and gratitude.
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There are many remarkable seniors in our lives that leave an indelible mark in our lives and memories. It is fitting to memorialize them in word and whenever possible through poetry. I am sure that if she could hear you, she would undoubtedly give you the biggest smile of approval and gratitude.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
