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Letters from Heaven's Gateway 3

Gus and Alice

35 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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What a beautiful heart warming story...so close to my own life and truly touching. I am crying, feeling the emotions that they shared. You expressed it so well. Congratulations ...smiles and hugs!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    I hope you'll read all of them. I will be compiling these with all my previous ones, all based on love letters. "Love Letter on a Napkin," was my first one. The I followed with "Love Letter on a Clipboard," and "To My Secret Admirer" which run in tandem and go back and forth to each other. My last group is "Letters from Heaven's Gateway" with four in that group so far. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
    I am deeply honored by your compliments and so glad to hear you could relate. Hearing this was so much like your own, makes it even more precious to me. It's never too late for love.
    Sending you my best today as always, along with many thanks!
    Sally xoxo
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a very engaging story and full of heart tugging emotion. The characters are believable and just like folks who pass through our lives. Well done!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for another superb review and six star rating. I am just delighted. I'm so glad you're enjoying these and I can tell I have a fan for life. This means more than anything. Again, thank you so much. Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Contests

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A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
    Wow!!! Thank you very much for the seven stars and recognition of my work. It is so appreciated, dear committee. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally Law :))
Comment from TallySally
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Sally - I really enjoyed your story. It was touching, real, and well-written.
Layered with so many truths.
Every day for five years - anyone who did that has to be in love with more than the food.
Like the fact that the letter was lost, not that it isn't good to put love in a letter - just that the best way, if possible, is face to face.
Dancing in the moonlight ... sleeping side by side ... now that is love.
Terrific.
God bless and my best,
Relda

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much, dear Reida. I appreciate your kind review and comments. It means so much to me that you stopped by. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Beautiful and touching story, love is more than physical attraction, love it's about touching somebody's heart and changing their life forever. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Iza. I could have sworn you reviewed this already. I appreciate you coming back and reviewing this. I just now posted number four in this series. I will be Publishing these stories in a book this year after I finish publishing my novella, What The Blind Girl Saw. I'm working on that right now. As always, I appreciate your kind reviews and encouragement in my work. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one, too.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by Iza Deleanu on 03-Feb-2020
    I reviewed the first letter that won the contest and this was my vote for this month contest. I am always touched by your stories
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much. How very kind you are. I write for readers just like you, Iza! Sal xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
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OMG. I am grabbing a few minutes at the library to catch up! THIS is so very touching. I hate to sit here in the library and cry! They will call the men in the white padded wagon to come pick me up. This is such a beautiful, lovely thing! GREAT JOB!
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    There you are. There are just some things I know you'll love. I'm delighted to please you, dear one. Thank you for the wonderful review and shower of stars. I'm excited for the days ahead in my writing.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxoxo
Comment from Father Flaps
Exceptional
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Good Morning, Sally
It's so easy to click six stars for this one, my dear. It's a beautiful love story, though a very sad ending. I'd like to read another version of the ending, I think, where the letter does arrive. But Gus has already died. Days later, a lawyer contacts Alice to tell her that she is in Gus's will, the sole beneficiary. I'll bet there are a lot of romances that never got off the ground for one reason or another. Your story held me right to the end. Well done!
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Dear Kimbob, I am deeply honored by your wonderful review and kindest compliments, once again. I so appreciate your time and attention to my work. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the new year,
    Sally xo
Comment from RPSaxena
Exceptional
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Hello Sally Law,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction having impressive wording; smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
The end makes the whole episode more interesting, and reminds me of Shakespearean Style.
Marvelous!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, RP. I am honored and pleased you enjoyed this. I appreciate the high marks and generous stars, too. Your continued kindness means so much.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :))
Comment from Tootie
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So romantic, yet sad. The love letter was so beautiful. The scene after was great. Everything was well written and flowed right along. Really enjoyed this and looking forward to reading more. AWESOME! Great song to share in notes. Thank you! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
(Commando & Tootie)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, dear Cathy. I'm so pleased you and Bill enjoyed this. I am blessed and deeply honored. This means the world to me. :) :)
    Sending you both my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from judelesemann
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This sweet story brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful writing. Love so fondly expressed in word and action. You really have a gift for writing...keep it up! Loved this story. I had to read it a few times I liked it so much.

Be blessed, Jude

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    Dear Jude, Thank you for the lovely review and blessing that you are to me already! Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally Law xo