Comment from May 1

Excellent

I think this poem is wonderfully written and fun to read. For many people, songs are seen as an escape from the troubles of life and I feel that this poem nicely reflects that. All in all, a very pleasant poem to read.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review May. I remember once in the underground metro in Montreal, a busker played this old forgotten song that just blew me away. With the echo from the tiles it was hauntingly beautiful and I did feel lifted spiritually. Cheers.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very gentle senryu offering for the evening... the 's' throughout helps to soothe reader's mind and bring the visual image more easily... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review. I do find comfort believing someone is watching over me. Have a great weekend, cheers.

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Elegant piece. I like how this poem connects from the top to the bottom by utilizing the words "angelic" and "heavenly." As the reader, the poem exhibits a soothing peace that is reflective of good imagery. Very well done

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020

Thanks for the insightful review. I do find comfort in believing there is a spiritual being watching over me. Have a peaceful weekend, cheers.