Teardrop
A human thing that can confuse38 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
Very touching to see a small child simply knowing. Knowing that all is well with mom and dad. Or that she is cared for.
Congratulations in winning this contest.
Drew
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Very touching to see a small child simply knowing. Knowing that all is well with mom and dad. Or that she is cared for.
Congratulations in winning this contest.
Drew
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Drew I am very grateful for your validation and glad wishes.
Comment from Tina Crute
What a beautiful creation of a senyru! It's
simplicity is beautifully illustrated with a child's joy. I like the reminder that tears are for joy, not always pain!
This made me smile:)
Tina
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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What a beautiful creation of a senyru! It's
simplicity is beautifully illustrated with a child's joy. I like the reminder that tears are for joy, not always pain!
This made me smile:)
Tina
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Tina, I appreciate the kind comments and I am smiling back.
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It doesn't surprise me!
Tina
Comment from Sally Law
Tears of joy are just gold drops from heaven, are they not? I love this photo from FanArt. It is just so sweet and crowns you short poem perfectly. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Tears of joy are just gold drops from heaven, are they not? I love this photo from FanArt. It is just so sweet and crowns you short poem perfectly. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Back at you my good friend, enjoy the moments that make you smile!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Teardrop, has the right set up and applauds with choked up sentiment the proof of life each child bears for thr future of mankind.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This 5-7-5, Teardrop, has the right set up and applauds with choked up sentiment the proof of life each child bears for thr future of mankind.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Bill, thanks very much for the review and comments.
Comment from Patty Palmer
What a little sweetie! I'm sure she can easily bring teardrops just from knowing her. They grow so fast! You turn around and they're grown, Keep track of every memory because you'll want to remember everything.
Patty
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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What a little sweetie! I'm sure she can easily bring teardrops just from knowing her. They grow so fast! You turn around and they're grown, Keep track of every memory because you'll want to remember everything.
Patty
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Patty, it is so very true how time never stands still and the little ones loose that God-gift of innocence we are all born with.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
In such few simple words, you managed to capture and successfully combine so many different emotion! This was really well written and no surprises that you won the contest! Congrats
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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In such few simple words, you managed to capture and successfully combine so many different emotion! This was really well written and no surprises that you won the contest! Congrats
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So delicate and beautiful - tears of joy shaped in the form of a drop of hope -simply knowing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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So delicate and beautiful - tears of joy shaped in the form of a drop of hope -simply knowing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Iza, Thank you for the review and comments
Comment from Susan Larson
How paradoxical that tears will flow for opposite reasons. Maybe it's not a matter of good or bad, happiness or sadness, but merely the release of strong emotion pouring forth. Very thought provoking.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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How paradoxical that tears will flow for opposite reasons. Maybe it's not a matter of good or bad, happiness or sadness, but merely the release of strong emotion pouring forth. Very thought provoking.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely poem in its succinct and warmly inclusive message and in perfect compliance with the prompt in both verse and image - best wishes in the contest with sweet and simple bit of philosophy...
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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In my opinion, a lovely poem in its succinct and warmly inclusive message and in perfect compliance with the prompt in both verse and image - best wishes in the contest with sweet and simple bit of philosophy...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Eve, Thank you for the review and comments.
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You're very welcome...Eve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We cry tears of joy and those are the tears I like best. Children feel comfort from knowing those around them can be trusted and that they are loved, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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We cry tears of joy and those are the tears I like best. Children feel comfort from knowing those around them can be trusted and that they are loved, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you Dolly, have a great week, upcoming.
