The Mighty Rhinoceros
Lives in the African Savannah unable to see the beauty.3 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a clever entry for the contest. Concentrating on the vision of the rhinoceros is a great idea. I know I wouldn't want to run into one, but it is said they don't see well so there a chance to get away.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is a clever entry for the contest. Concentrating on the vision of the rhinoceros is a great idea. I know I wouldn't want to run into one, but it is said they don't see well so there a chance to get away.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Mighty Rhinoceros"
Is a 20/20 Vision Poetry Contest Entry."
And, it was rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a good day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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"The Mighty Rhinoceros"
Is a 20/20 Vision Poetry Contest Entry."
And, it was rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a good day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from susand3022
An interesting topic for the 20/20 Vision Poetry Contest! I never thought about the fact that Rhino's really only have decent side vision and can't really see in front of them until a certain distance... I guess 15 feet! LOL Good luck with the contest! :)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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An interesting topic for the 20/20 Vision Poetry Contest! I never thought about the fact that Rhino's really only have decent side vision and can't really see in front of them until a certain distance... I guess 15 feet! LOL Good luck with the contest! :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Just trying a creative approach. Thank you for your review.
