Waves of Peace
Finding comfort in Nature8 total reviews
Comment from May 1
This is such a lovely poem. I think that the ocean can provide peace to anyone. I really like the way you wrote this poem and the image you chose for it.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
This is such a lovely poem. I think that the ocean can provide peace to anyone. I really like the way you wrote this poem and the image you chose for it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you:) I'm so grateful to have access to such beauty.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ocean poem. I also experience that whatever the mood of the ocean is when we take a walk on the shore it calms your mind and make you feel revived.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
A very well-written 5-7-5 ocean poem. I also experience that whatever the mood of the ocean is when we take a walk on the shore it calms your mind and make you feel revived.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Ben Colder
Must agree with the poet. The ocean at times offer peacful moments and then there time it does not. I find nothing wrong with this write. The photo is breathtaking.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
Must agree with the poet. The ocean at times offer peacful moments and then there time it does not. I find nothing wrong with this write. The photo is breathtaking.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The ocean does certainly offer peace for all, doesn't it! A wonderful entry for the ocean contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
The ocean does certainly offer peace for all, doesn't it! A wonderful entry for the ocean contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Tina Crute
We csn all agree on what your poem says. The ocean is soothing and beautiful, no matter if its calm or active. The picture couldn't be better and your background too. It all blends to draw us to the ocean. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
We csn all agree on what your poem says. The ocean is soothing and beautiful, no matter if its calm or active. The picture couldn't be better and your background too. It all blends to draw us to the ocean. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from RodG
Interesting that the Speaker finds peace in ANY ocean setting. I like how you draw a contrast between rough and still and allow your reader to use his imagination. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
Interesting that the Speaker finds peace in ANY ocean setting. I like how you draw a contrast between rough and still and allow your reader to use his imagination. Rod
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt.
This short verse tells of finding peace in encounters with the ocean.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt.
This short verse tells of finding peace in encounters with the ocean.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery paints a vivid
word picture of the ocean
and the tides.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
-Very nice image.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery paints a vivid
word picture of the ocean
and the tides.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you:)
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You are welcome.