New Year Awakening
A 100-Word Flash Fiction33 total reviews
Comment from Rikki66
What is good for the goose is good for the gander. She got the tickets and he is moving. His cheating bit him in the a**. Now it is going to bite him in the wallet. Good work.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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What is good for the goose is good for the gander. She got the tickets and he is moving. His cheating bit him in the a**. Now it is going to bite him in the wallet. Good work.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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LOL! Yeah, this was just a 'quick one' to get my pen back in the 'prose groove'.... I hadn't written a story since before Christmas! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed this one, Rikki, and I'm so thankful for those wonderful stars, my friend!! ;) I'm trying to catch my tail around here, so I apologize for the delay here.... gonna try to finally catch it by tonight... ;) :) :) Take care and thank you again! ;) Yvette
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You are always in the grove.I know you are busy so No apology needed.
Rikki
Comment from poetwatch
I love Melanie. She is the type of woman with a heart to share. Probably wanted Trent gone a long time ago. :) Good 100 Yvette. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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I love Melanie. She is the type of woman with a heart to share. Probably wanted Trent gone a long time ago. :) Good 100 Yvette. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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More than likely, that is probably the case! ;) LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Jose, hope you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from May 1
Wow, I love the twist in this story. It came as such a surprise and I loved that because I was already starting to feel sorry for her and then suddenly...I support her actions. Great story!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Wow, I love the twist in this story. It came as such a surprise and I loved that because I was already starting to feel sorry for her and then suddenly...I support her actions. Great story!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, May, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, New Year Awakening, finds Trent getting the heave ho for New Years. Fortunately he'll be in Tahiti while his car is assaulted.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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This story, New Year Awakening, finds Trent getting the heave ho for New Years. Fortunately he'll be in Tahiti while his car is assaulted.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Maybe not.... if she's taken the tickets... LOL! ;) Thanx for the review, Bill! ;)
Comment from w.j.debi
Surprise. Things didn't go at all how Trent expected. I wonder who Melanie will take to Tahiti with her. Looks like Trent will be busy finding new digs in the meantime.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Surprise. Things didn't go at all how Trent expected. I wonder who Melanie will take to Tahiti with her. Looks like Trent will be busy finding new digs in the meantime.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, WJ -- Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Ricky1024
"New Year Awakening
Is a 100 Word Flash Fiction Piece"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks Yvette.
Ricky
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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"New Year Awakening
Is a 100 Word Flash Fiction Piece"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks Yvette.
Ricky
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Ricky, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. That's a funny story. I had to read it three times to get it straightened out in my mind. I finally figured it out. It must have been the time of day. When I saw the picture of the box sitting in the water on the beach, my mind jumped the tracks. :))) (#_#) Z
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello Yvette. That's a funny story. I had to read it three times to get it straightened out in my mind. I finally figured it out. It must have been the time of day. When I saw the picture of the box sitting in the water on the beach, my mind jumped the tracks. :))) (#_#) Z
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Z, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
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You're welcome. (*_*) Z
(*_*)...happy look
(#_#)...confused look
(^_^)...surprised look
(+_+)...Bored/sleepy look
(@_@)...Shocked/startled look
(!_!)...sad look
(~_~)...gotcha look
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Soooo... I figured you were unconfused by the end of the review... no? He came home to find her packing - he had planned on leaving her for Emily but she found the tickets - but it turns out she figured it all out and it was his stuff she was packing to kick him out.
Sorry -- didn't realize you hadn't figured it out after the third time... :) ;) ;)
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I DID figure it out the third time. That's why I didn't read it the fourth. Don't be mad at me. Sometimes it takes a while. (!_!)
Comment from BeasPeas
So she packed him up and he can go live with Emily when he gets back from Tahiti with her. Better yet, let he and Emily stay in Tahiti altogether. Why come back? Spouses always know what's going on. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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So she packed him up and he can go live with Emily when he gets back from Tahiti with her. Better yet, let he and Emily stay in Tahiti altogether. Why come back? Spouses always know what's going on. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Marilyn, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Joan E.
Clever girls--you and Mel--to lead us on so! I had no idea where this story was going. Great job with the dramatic picture too. I've been married to my husband for 48 years, but that's no guarantee!! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Clever girls--you and Mel--to lead us on so! I had no idea where this story was going. Great job with the dramatic picture too. I've been married to my husband for 48 years, but that's no guarantee!! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Joan, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from damommy
Hahahahaha! Good for her. He wasn't let down gently, and didn't deserve to be. Can you imagine what that would be like, to find tickets not meant for you? What a great twist at the end. She got first up.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hahahahaha! Good for her. He wasn't let down gently, and didn't deserve to be. Can you imagine what that would be like, to find tickets not meant for you? What a great twist at the end. She got first up.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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LOL! ;) Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Yvonne, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
