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Atlantis Watches

a 5-7-5 about ocean devastation.

4 total reviews 
Comment from May 1
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I love this. It's quite an interesting view of the topic. All in all, I think that this poem is very well written and fun to read. Also, the image you chose works really well with the topic.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thank you ever so much for the review. I greatly appreciate you comments.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
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What you wrote here gave me goosebumps as soon as I read it! Wow! The idea of the whole of Atlantis watching what we are doing to there oceans is terrifying somehow. I'm going to vote for you. Great work choosing the picture as well!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thank you ever so much. Your review and comments are most appreciated and that goes double for your vote.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Hello there, my friend. This is a lovely 5-7-5 Ocean entry. The line "Atlantis watches" sets a tone for the awareness of our oceans. Nicely done. Happy New Year! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thank you. i greatly appreciate your review. Happy New Year to you!
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 03-Jan-2020
    Very Welcome:)))
Comment from the13thpoet
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Happy New Year to you! Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Truly am grateful for your review and good luck comment. Happy New Year to you!