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beauty- not always attractive
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Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Wow... that is certainly a very powerful vision of the jealousy that truly consumes -- well-done for those 'green eyes' there! A wonderful offering for the 'Art' contest! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Sanity cease the day --> Sanity ceased the day
shadow stalk --> shadows stalk OR shadow stalks
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
Comment from
Laura L. DiMartino
I like the staccato vibe from this. A lot of poets clutter their work with the, is, other modifiers. I question "loving princess" as perhaps being a bit trite, but overall, I think this was well done!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
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