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Comment from Tina Crute
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Perfect graphic for your words. I almost knew the poem would be about individual thoughts or decisions before I read your poem. You are a word artist, blending style, picture and letters to deliver a clear thought.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Tina, fo4 the positive and kind review. Bill
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow, that pic is almost disconcerting to the eye...lol! :) But I can see where it fits your 'varied' theme here... One might almost say that your offering is an ominous foreshadowing to sides and views that seem to be solidifying on the national landscape... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from Joan E.
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I was intrigued by your title and vivid artwork selection. Your use of alliteration added to the intensity of your message about finding ourselves. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest- Joan

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Joan.
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem. I like the way the colors of the font pull colors out of the picture. This is a very nice little pome to start the new year. Blessings and all the best in 2020.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Therese
Comment from lyenochka
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So is fashion forming us? Or are we fitting fashion to our own varied forms? I like your presentation of the abstract picture and using the same colors in your poem, and using the blue for all the f-alliterative words. Happy New Year, Bill!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you, lyenochka. HNY
Comment from judiverse
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Interesting artwork choice. Very colorful presentation. The new year encourages people to try new ventures. "Fashioning" is a great word to describe the feelings at the beginning of a new year. "Form" and "fit" also work in very nicely. Best wishes for a wonderful New Year! jusi

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    Thanks, Judi. HNY !
reply by judiverse on 01-Jan-2020
    You're welcome. Congratulations on finishing first in the scripts category. judi
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very interesting and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and very true words with neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    Thanks, Teri.
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Bill, we do adapt, don't we? As if we have any choice in the matter if we want to live. You've got to roll with the punches, as they say. The big question is... what's coming next, and will we be able to survive it?

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    The 20s will likely bring civil upheaval at some level. A renewed Trump presidency will be seen by liberals as proof that democracy is dead. If liberals somehow get in, they will be stifled by a senate that?s seen as OWNED.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. I like this colorful display. One thing we can be sure of in 2020 will be ups and downs, nothing different from past years. There's good and bad in all of them. It's how we react to them that determines which. HNY to you and yours. Marilyn

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great 575 with a special message, Bill. Yes all people are different each with something to offer to the mix. Your presentation is great--the image, the font colors, and the alliteration of 'f'. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
    Thanks, Jan.