Palm On My Arm
What a walk through the gates of heaven might be like27 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your spiritual Rondeau is written well to form and we can sense your emotions as you talk of the different stages of life. Nicely done JLR.
cheers
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Your spiritual Rondeau is written well to form and we can sense your emotions as you talk of the different stages of life. Nicely done JLR.
cheers
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2019
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Pearl, thank you.
Comment from angel123
I feel your poem is a beautiful testament of faith. It flows with your personal emotional truth and it rhymes well too. I like your artwork choice. It enhances your message of faith. Your poem is inspiring and it makes me think about Heaven. Now, I too will think more about what it would be like to enter the gates of Heaven. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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I feel your poem is a beautiful testament of faith. It flows with your personal emotional truth and it rhymes well too. I like your artwork choice. It enhances your message of faith. Your poem is inspiring and it makes me think about Heaven. Now, I too will think more about what it would be like to enter the gates of Heaven. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
It would or will be great when the time comes that I'm standing in front of the pearly gates of Heaven and you are greeted by angels or family members or maybe even greeted by Jesus himself. Oh, what a great day that would be!
Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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It would or will be great when the time comes that I'm standing in front of the pearly gates of Heaven and you are greeted by angels or family members or maybe even greeted by Jesus himself. Oh, what a great day that would be!
Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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Patty, a truly wonderful event to come at the the designed time along our journey.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jlr! such a beautiful sentiment. and an intriguing commentary.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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this is an exquisite piece of poetry dear jlr! such a beautiful sentiment. and an intriguing commentary.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, I am without enough words that would convey my deep gratitude for your six-star review. Thank you with BIG HUG :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the sentiments here and your repeated line is magical, the flow for me is a bit spasmodic and could be improved. You made me smile with some of your inventive liens, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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I adore the sentiments here and your repeated line is magical, the flow for me is a bit spasmodic and could be improved. You made me smile with some of your inventive liens, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you 🙏
Comment from amada
This poem it feels like a prayer for me. I was touch by the phrase referring to entering the autumn years. This is a very creative line when referringto the passing of the years. Another line that talked to me was this: "my lost family, I started to see. I lost a grandson not long ago....
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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This poem it feels like a prayer for me. I was touch by the phrase referring to entering the autumn years. This is a very creative line when referringto the passing of the years. Another line that talked to me was this: "my lost family, I started to see. I lost a grandson not long ago....
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Amanda thank you for the six-star review I am so sorry for your loss we should never live long enough o suffer the void of losing a child or grandchild.
Comment from damommy
What a lovely way to think of Heaven, and to have angels guide me through the gate would be wonderful. To see God and have His hand on my shoulder is what I pray for. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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What a lovely way to think of Heaven, and to have angels guide me through the gate would be wonderful. To see God and have His hand on my shoulder is what I pray for. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, this is a lovely and very moving rondeau, well written and true to form. Good use of metaphor in 'stuck among the shoals of life's stormy sea.' I found your last stanza very lovely but sad. A perfectly written spiritual poem and an enjoyable read. Warm regards and good luck to you - Dorothy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Hello JLR, this is a lovely and very moving rondeau, well written and true to form. Good use of metaphor in 'stuck among the shoals of life's stormy sea.' I found your last stanza very lovely but sad. A perfectly written spiritual poem and an enjoyable read. Warm regards and good luck to you - Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did a good job with this poetry form. Oh, how we all wish we could know what the afterlife will be like. Well, I enjoyed exploring a little bit through this well written poem. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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You did a good job with this poetry form. Oh, how we all wish we could know what the afterlife will be like. Well, I enjoyed exploring a little bit through this well written poem. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Lou, thank you!
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
This is lovely and reflective. For some reason, it seems most of us facing our autumn and winter years begin to realize time is short and we need to repent of our earlier ways and seek God. This is an intimate poem that calls to all of us and can touch the hearts who have gone astray - or just need that touch of the Lord to guide us home. Your artwork certainly fits the poem and you have given us a tender nudge.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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This is lovely and reflective. For some reason, it seems most of us facing our autumn and winter years begin to realize time is short and we need to repent of our earlier ways and seek God. This is an intimate poem that calls to all of us and can touch the hearts who have gone astray - or just need that touch of the Lord to guide us home. Your artwork certainly fits the poem and you have given us a tender nudge.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
