Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

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Now, how did I miss this one? I've been looking out for the next chapter! I love the way the dragons are showing their personalities and it's good to see Black being a positive help... though of course he just HAD to drag his sister by the tail!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019

Thanks. He hauled her out of there any way he could. He's beginning do discover who he is, and who he wants to be. I'll fix that spag. I just posted the next chapter.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Some interesting developments here and a dramatic incident with the mountain lion. Good to see Black defending Purple and playing his part as a member of the family, now that his wound is healed. Pink continues to surprise!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019

Thanks. I wanted Black to figure out who he was, so I had him save Purple.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I love your fantasy fiction. It is well written and I like the wonderful amount of dialogue you used.
Have a blessed week.
Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's quite a dramatic dream. And it shows how Aaron has such a love for the dragons with such a parental protectiveness. I liked the part of Pink suddenly enlarging herself. Very clever!

One question:
"The l little pink dragon was suddenly gone, " (Is the "I" supposed to be here?)

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'll have to check on that 'I' right now. I don't think it should he there.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Exceptional

Oh geez! A mountain lion! Had me on the edge of my seat! Thank God Black showed up! That little feisty one is kind of my favorite I think! I love how Pink transformed though! Love the color scheme of the flaming yellows and oranges!

Looking forward to the next chapter as always! xoxo

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks! Glad I had you on the edge of your seat.I wanted Black to start figuring out who he is, so I had him save Purple. Pink is feisty in a different way. She's full of attitude.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 01-Dec-2019

I truly love them all! How could you not! Maybe because Black was injured and has had to overcome that is what makes my heart love him so much :). xoxo

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Ooh Cindy,
this was a good one. I was quite sad to see purple go and when Aaron couldn't help her I was sure she was going to die. I never thought Black would be the one to come to her rescue. I hoped that little chap would come good in the end. I really liked this one. Thank you for not killing of purple.
Keep writing.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks. I didn't want to kill Purple. I wanted Black to figure out who he was and who he wanted to be. Purple helped him do it. Glad you liked this chapter.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this tale of sentient dragons, and the men who are trying to protect and raise them, until presumably they're able to raise themselves. Pink has been offended and is able to shapeshifter, at least for awhile. Poor purple gets herself into a mess of trouble until black with fire helps her out and drags here to safety. Then a witch turns up to help. Well done Cindy, I enjoyed your tale, I've read on before, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Pink can't actually shapeshift, it's an illusion. It's still going to scare the bejeebies out of anyone who doesn't know her.

reply by royowen on 01-Dec-2019

Well done, well, the illusion of shape shifting, heheh, wish I could do it.

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

How brave Black was. That was totally unexpected. Despite his grumpy demeanor, he loves his little family. Good to know that they are beginning to realize their powers. You had me going for a moment until Purple was rescued by Black. Whew!


-We're best to camp under [] the pines."

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks for the six! The dragons are discovering who they are. Black has learned something important.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I'm so glad purple is alright, that black saved her. The poor thing must have been terrified facing the lion on her own. The part about pink was cute, believable with her attitude, made me chuckle. I hope whatever the lady wants isn't too bad. The story is well-written, very interesting, suspenseful. Love your hook at the end.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks. Purple was scared, and Black discovered who he was. Yep, Pink has plenty of attitude.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good for Black! I'm thrilled he seems back to normal. I enjoyed this chapter Cindy. It is filled with great action and intrigue. Things really are heating up. I like the 'powers' the dragons have developed. They will be useful in their quest. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019

Thanks. Black is feeling better, and he's discovering who he is, and who he wants to be. They all are.