An Autumn Repose (tableau)
6 verses, 5 syllables each line15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I somehow missed this post until now, and it certainly is appropriate for this chilly day! I enjoyed your description of "An autumn repose" in five-syllable lines and a matching picture. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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I somehow missed this post until now, and it certainly is appropriate for this chilly day! I enjoyed your description of "An autumn repose" in five-syllable lines and a matching picture. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. This is nicely composed, descriptive and well illustrated of a chilly autumn day. Makes me want to curl up and enjoy the goodies you have placed by the window.
Instructions say "6 verses, 5 syllables each line" ~ maybe 6 lines, 5 syllables each line?
Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Hi Alicia. This is nicely composed, descriptive and well illustrated of a chilly autumn day. Makes me want to curl up and enjoy the goodies you have placed by the window.
Instructions say "6 verses, 5 syllables each line" ~ maybe 6 lines, 5 syllables each line?
Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Did I do it wrong? Let me look... You're nice. Thank you :)
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Hi Alicia. I thought it was 6 lines of 5 syllables, but I could be the one who's wrong. How did you make out in the contest? Is it over? Hugs, Marilyn
Comment from DragonSkulls
This is an excellent entry, author, but in case no one has filled you in yet, the contest rules say that pictures aren't allowed. The FS committee won't let this go through to booth with the picture on it. There's still time to reedit and fix it so it complies to the rules. Best of luck in the voting.
DS
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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This is an excellent entry, author, but in case no one has filled you in yet, the contest rules say that pictures aren't allowed. The FS committee won't let this go through to booth with the picture on it. There's still time to reedit and fix it so it complies to the rules. Best of luck in the voting.
DS
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from rjuselius
just a heads up for your beautiful poem. there are no pictures allowed. i wouldn't want you disqualified for this mistake. it seems that poets haven't read the whole requirements. love and hugs,
rebekka
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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just a heads up for your beautiful poem. there are no pictures allowed. i wouldn't want you disqualified for this mistake. it seems that poets haven't read the whole requirements. love and hugs,
rebekka
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Prativa
Simple yet lovely and warm. One of my favorite moment you just gave the words.
The picture is nice. Would be better if the water marks are not there.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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Simple yet lovely and warm. One of my favorite moment you just gave the words.
The picture is nice. Would be better if the water marks are not there.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your tableau, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per 6 lines--not 6 verses. I envision this autumn scene perfectly. The rules state no picture--so better delete it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed your tableau, Mystery Author. Good job on the syllable count per 6 lines--not 6 verses. I envision this autumn scene perfectly. The rules state no picture--so better delete it. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Jannypan! Yeah, okay. Thank you :)
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful short poem and image you have given the reader, after reading this great work I read the rules for this prompt, it says that the title should contain the word tableau is this correct? very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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What a beautiful short poem and image you have given the reader, after reading this great work I read the rules for this prompt, it says that the title should contain the word tableau is this correct? very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hiyah Kah! I changed the title. I appreciate you catching that. There's more... No graphics, but I'm muslim instead of non-practicing muslim if I following the rules. Lolz. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
Comment from RodG
I really like this tableau, especially paired with that wonderful photo. Yes, what is more representative of autumn than sweaters and cocoa and "lively leaves"?
CAUTION. The prompt directions say "tableau" should be in your title. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I really like this tableau, especially paired with that wonderful photo. Yes, what is more representative of autumn than sweaters and cocoa and "lively leaves"?
CAUTION. The prompt directions say "tableau" should be in your title. Rod
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi RodG! I made the edit. You're so nice. Thank you :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from Flyaway1
Well done. It has been a beautiful fall. Picture and colors chosen added to the meaning of the words.
Fall in repose ... before the cold hits.
Fall and a cup of hot chocolate is the best.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Well done. It has been a beautiful fall. Picture and colors chosen added to the meaning of the words.
Fall in repose ... before the cold hits.
Fall and a cup of hot chocolate is the best.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! I say autumn more often. So I wrote it that way. I grew up East Coast. So the season actually exists. Thank you :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Love your picture about autumn. It seems like we just can't hold onto the warm 70's days; we live in a state where we have sweater weather and what's known as having four seasons. The cocoa weather is approaching. Stay warm!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Love your picture about autumn. It seems like we just can't hold onto the warm 70's days; we live in a state where we have sweater weather and what's known as having four seasons. The cocoa weather is approaching. Stay warm!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Rosemary! Life is still that way for many. California cold fall nights gets the weather (it snows in northern california) or Washington all those rainy autumn days & nights. New England and Colorado is definitely stuck with sweaters and cocoa weather too. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
