Taken
Taken by our Lord.40 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
I found this to be moving and poignant, especially along with your authors notes.
It had perfect flow and a good rhyme scheme and I found no room for improvement whatsoever. I find that riding is a soothing balm,
And it is my prayer that your soul heals over time.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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I found this to be moving and poignant, especially along with your authors notes.
It had perfect flow and a good rhyme scheme and I found no room for improvement whatsoever. I find that riding is a soothing balm,
And it is my prayer that your soul heals over time.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Darren, for the exceptional review and great six star award
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You are very welcome~
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
Comment from Sanku
This is a very touching poem about the death of someone dear .I liked the positivity of the theme .That he has more to do in this world and then he would soon join her ...I liked that very much.
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This is a very touching poem about the death of someone dear .I liked the positivity of the theme .That he has more to do in this world and then he would soon join her ...I liked that very much.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
Comment from amahra
What a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. And to think that love lasted six decades is amazing. Great rhyming and a steady rhythm, the poem is heartfelt and warm.
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What a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. And to think that love lasted six decades is amazing. Great rhyming and a steady rhythm, the poem is heartfelt and warm.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from l.raven
HI Willie, I wish I had a six for you...******...
I'm so sorry for the loss of your beloved wife...
but there will be a day when you are holding her
again...she never really left you sweet guy...
she is in your heart...never to be forgotten...
her spirit is now in Heaven...she is now at peace
with God...
I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
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HI Willie, I wish I had a six for you...******...
I'm so sorry for the loss of your beloved wife...
but there will be a day when you are holding her
again...she never really left you sweet guy...
she is in your heart...never to be forgotten...
her spirit is now in Heaven...she is now at peace
with God...
I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful poem you have written for this contest. It is always hard to lose a loved one, and especially our spouse who has been a best friend for many years. I like the verse:
"The Lord has more for me to do,
My time has not yet come.
Wait for me my darling love
My work is not yet done."
The Lord has a plan for each one of us and though we do not understand, we trust His timing.
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What a beautiful poem you have written for this contest. It is always hard to lose a loved one, and especially our spouse who has been a best friend for many years. I like the verse:
"The Lord has more for me to do,
My time has not yet come.
Wait for me my darling love
My work is not yet done."
The Lord has a plan for each one of us and though we do not understand, we trust His timing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
Willie,
This is a well done ode to your wife. It has a nice easy abcb rhyme scheme. It shows your faith and love for your wife.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Willie,
This is a well done ode to your wife. It has a nice easy abcb rhyme scheme. It shows your faith and love for your wife.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from royowen
There's a lot to be said for our acceptance of our "lot" in life, why we live longer than someone who has lived a good life, but went before me, a less deserving, to my perception, of not knowing why I'm still here. This is profound in its observations, articulate in expression, and nicely rhymed Willie, well done, blessings Roy
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There's a lot to be said for our acceptance of our "lot" in life, why we live longer than someone who has lived a good life, but went before me, a less deserving, to my perception, of not knowing why I'm still here. This is profound in its observations, articulate in expression, and nicely rhymed Willie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
Taken by our Lord.
Taken
Willie P. Smith,
my your excellent rhyming poem tells us with sadness of a husband who wife has passed as, he waits to be with his love tells his loved one; they will waiting for the angels wings to wrap around around him and his wife them around me and my loved when we arrive through the heavens his wife and him will soar.
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Taken by our Lord.
Taken
Willie P. Smith,
my your excellent rhyming poem tells us with sadness of a husband who wife has passed as, he waits to be with his love tells his loved one; they will waiting for the angels wings to wrap around around him and his wife them around me and my loved when we arrive through the heavens his wife and him will soar.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a loving and very personal poem to your late wife. Your sorrow is felt in every stanza, as is your love for her.
The beautiful ending and image is profounding.
This certainly deserves a six.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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This is a loving and very personal poem to your late wife. Your sorrow is felt in every stanza, as is your love for her.
The beautiful ending and image is profounding.
This certainly deserves a six.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you very much Mary, for your very nice review and wonderful
six stars. You honor me.
