The Kindness of Strangers
A Pantoum22 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Strangers are not always bad or doubtful, at the instance of traumatic days worldwide on the face of COVID 19; we have to rely on the kindness of strangers as we are doing and trying to survive; well said.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Strangers are not always bad or doubtful, at the instance of traumatic days worldwide on the face of COVID 19; we have to rely on the kindness of strangers as we are doing and trying to survive; well said.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from samandlancelot
June,
I love the image you paired with your poem. Koalas are such cute animals. Kindhearted people make all the difference in the world. Good people do risk their lives when they care about others. I like the way you compared the people who saved the koalas with the people who save lives today affected by Caronavirus.
Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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June,
I love the image you paired with your poem. Koalas are such cute animals. Kindhearted people make all the difference in the world. Good people do risk their lives when they care about others. I like the way you compared the people who saved the koalas with the people who save lives today affected by Caronavirus.
Patricia
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from RShipp
It does seem the world moves from one major disaster to another crisis to, only to have an unseen catastrophe afoot.
A perfect picture for your poem.
Best of luck in the "Rhyming Poem" contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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It does seem the world moves from one major disaster to another crisis to, only to have an unseen catastrophe afoot.
A perfect picture for your poem.
Best of luck in the "Rhyming Poem" contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Raul1
This is a nice and thoughtful read. Yes, God is love. You made it very clear. Thanks for sharing! I think that God isn't judge and justice, but he is love. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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This is a nice and thoughtful read. Yes, God is love. You made it very clear. Thanks for sharing! I think that God isn't judge and justice, but he is love. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind thoughts!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
Flowers are proof perfect that God is love. I agree wholeheartedly in this. I enjoyed your rhyming poem and lovely entry for the upcoming contest, June.
All my best,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Flowers are proof perfect that God is love. I agree wholeheartedly in this. I enjoyed your rhyming poem and lovely entry for the upcoming contest, June.
All my best,
Sally xo
Comment Written 22-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written work dear June, the mono patterned rhyming of this form is really quite exquisite in its cleverly woven and gives it a spontaneity to be admired, you are a skilled wordsmith, Just love this form My friend, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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A beautifully written work dear June, the mono patterned rhyming of this form is really quite exquisite in its cleverly woven and gives it a spontaneity to be admired, you are a skilled wordsmith, Just love this form My friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. It was a new format for me, but I found it suited the subject. Thanks for the kind review.
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It did indeed June
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful rhymed poem. The Terza Rima is one I haven't tried yet, but after reading your offering, it looks like something most beautiful.
Your movement in this poem is mellow and breezy which is just the thing to illustrate your faith.
Great job June and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Beautiful rhymed poem. The Terza Rima is one I haven't tried yet, but after reading your offering, it looks like something most beautiful.
Your movement in this poem is mellow and breezy which is just the thing to illustrate your faith.
Great job June and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights. I enjoyed trying out this new format. It suited the subject well. Always nie to hear from you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That flower has seen love along its path as well -- a wonderful gift for a mom that loves in so many different ways... This is such a poignant write, June - doesn't seem that way at first but once I was drawn to re-read the gentle, descriptive lines I found the warmth laced within the lines from the Hand above to those along the way...gifts all. ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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That flower has seen love along its path as well -- a wonderful gift for a mom that loves in so many different ways... This is such a poignant write, June - doesn't seem that way at first but once I was drawn to re-read the gentle, descriptive lines I found the warmth laced within the lines from the Hand above to those along the way...gifts all. ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive and encouraging feedback!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In this beautiful, vividly descriptive poem, you have effectively used the flower and its "travels" as symbols of people's emotions, ranging from romantic happiness to sadness. Lovely
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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In this beautiful, vividly descriptive poem, you have effectively used the flower and its "travels" as symbols of people's emotions, ranging from romantic happiness to sadness. Lovely
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive and encouraging feedback!
Comment from Bill Schott
This terza rima, A Flower, has the proper formatting and flowers the outcast bloom through its apparent downward trek until its worthwhile use provides renewed importance for the gift now delivered. Neat poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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This terza rima, A Flower, has the proper formatting and flowers the outcast bloom through its apparent downward trek until its worthwhile use provides renewed importance for the gift now delivered. Neat poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive and encouraging feedback!
