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Telekinetic

This is your brain on drugs.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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What an eye-catching title and picture! I admired your witty poem and rhymed couplets, plus the repeat of the catchy "telekinetic". I hope your entry did well in the contest. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
    I didn't get any votes.
Comment from RodG
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I truly enjoyed this poem's dark humor. There are many--like the Speaker--who have great talent and/or IQ which they abuse with drugs. This guy went to far, but I can't way I feel very sorry for him. I like the phrase "comatose telekinetic."
Rod

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Yeah, IQ doesn't do you much good in a coma... this is definitely a good offering for the 'nonsense' contest! ;) Good rhyme and leaves the reader scratching their heads... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks for reviewing.