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Never Forsaken

An acrostic poem

43 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Exceptional
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this poem is really stunning. The image is, too. What beautiful verses to read. Are you talking about God and your husband probably, too? I love reading your writing.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for the superb review and kindest compliments, Rosemary. I am deeply honored by this. In the particular poem, I am speaking of Christ although my husband and I were married in Christ 44 years ago and remain happily married, still bonded in our Lord.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from LaRosa
Exceptional
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I very much enjoyed this poem, Sally.
Your acrostic worked well and your ability to share your heart for the Savior is natural and believable. No strain to follow you.
The words: "I came with soil" brought my heart and mind to a stop and I had to savor their meaning.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much much La Rosa. How good to see your review and generous six stars and compliments. I am deeply honored by this. I miss you terribly, and hope to see you again sooner than later.

    Have a wonderful and blessed Thanksgiving and Christmas.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by LaRosa on 19-Nov-2019
    thank you, Sally. As you can see, i'm getting my feet wet again by reading and reviewing. It's nice to catch-up on friends here. I always enjoy your writing. God bless.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    This is good news! Welcome back!!
    Xo
Comment from fm wright
Exceptional
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A truly exceptional acrostic poem. One worthy of no less than a six, as it flows in both rhythm and thought, and the sentiments expressed uses the form beautifully. Best of wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the loely review and kind compliments, dear Faye. This style of poetry is new to me and thought I'd give it a try. I am deeply honored and always look forward to what my dear Faye thinks. Sending you my very best, and many thanks for the generous review and stars.
    Sal xoxo
reply by fm wright on 17-Nov-2019
    Certainly deserving. You did an amazing first time job!
    xoxo
    Faye
reply by fm wright on 18-Nov-2019
    As always, my best to you.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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A very beautiful acrostic poem that is full of Faith and love. Trusting in divine support within your life and beyond. The picture is a wonderful enhancement to your words.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for your lovely review of my faith based poem. It is so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Gail Denham
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Very nice poem - enjoyed it - and rejoice with you in the fact that our Christ cares for us - follows us - guides us. It's a good testiment to the power of our Lord.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the lovely review. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A very pretty prayer and tribute Savior. If you are right with the Lord, you will have eternity to live. Just let Him comfort you when you are scared. He's never let me down!
God bless!!
Patty

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Patty. I'm glad to hear of God's faithful to you as well. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Never Forsaken", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but sadly, I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing my next post.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you dear Suchess. It is always good to hear from you and I gladly receive all virtual sixes. You are so very kind.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-Nov-2019

    Sally, my possum, as always, you're very welcome. I think we all try to be kind.
    God bless and take care,
    the Duchess !(-_-)!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    You are most welcome, my peach. ;)
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 18-Nov-2019

    Probably more a prune, but peach sounds SO yummy!
    God bless and take care,
    the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a nicely composed acrostic faith poem, Sally. Our belief in him keeps us positive and going in the right direction. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you, dear Marilyn. I'm glad you enjoyed my faith-inspired acrostic. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Janetsue
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This is a beautiful acrostic about saving faith and the joy, trust and comfort it brings. It cannot truly be understood until it is acquired. Then, sisters and brothers in the Lord are perfectly tuned in to every word. Forever blessings, Janet

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you, dear Janet. Our mutual faith in Christ is a blessed one, amd you continue to add kindness to my life here at FanStory. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in the Lord Jesus Christ. Sally xoxo
    Sally xo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest.
Your message in your Never Forsaken verse is clear and well told.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you Sharon, for your kind review and well wishing. It is always so appreciated and needed.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo