a nice hot bath.
a short story2 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You told the story so naturally. Put in the tension with her daughter, but allowed her to agree to the girls night in without feeling unnatural. And the ending. T hings like really do happen.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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You told the story so naturally. Put in the tension with her daughter, but allowed her to agree to the girls night in without feeling unnatural. And the ending. T hings like really do happen.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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My mom has kept me in a few nights with the promise of a nice relaxing evening instead of going out ha ha. Thanks for the review, cheers.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This short story, A Nice Hot Bath, finds that power moment when a mother's premonition and timely action saved a daughter's life. A powerful tale that happens oppositely all the time.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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This short story, A Nice Hot Bath, finds that power moment when a mother's premonition and timely action saved a daughter's life. A powerful tale that happens oppositely all the time.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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My mom kept me from going out a few times with the promise of a relaxing evening. Thanks for the review, cheers.
