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A morbid high

13 word horror poetry contest

33 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello!
Wow!
I don't do well with gore, but I surely appreciate your ability to tell a story in thirteen words. Your poem gives a whole new meaning to the word, "intoxicating!" I may not sleep tonight...just sayin'

Thank you!
diane

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Diane, for the awesome review, my friend. I enjoyed the prompt, but never want to meet this crazed killer lol.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from Brian Hill
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What did I just read?. Wow
Short and simple explanation of the( in your face ) graphics with the unseen and unwritten playing into your visual.
Wow is all I got. Well done

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    LOL! Thank you for the awesome review, Brian. I had fun with this challenge.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from dragonpoet
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The poem and artwork match the title well. It seems to be of a killer who really loves what he does. Possibly a psychopath.
Hope this does well in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Dragonpoet for the awesome review, my friend.
    God bless
    Steve
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Nov-2019
    You are most kindly welcom, Steve.
    Same to you.
    Keep writing
    ~Joan
Comment from Barbaraj1
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Great poem! The artwork is also excellent. So much said in so few
words. Very creepy. A well-penned poem that earned you a ribbon.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Barbara, for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
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Your image was certainly morbid and lots of red blood. You certainly met the requirements of the contest. Well penned. Good luck in the contest. ~Brenda

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Brenda, for the excellent review, my friend. I enjoyed the challenge.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from Bichon
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Oh, morbid is definitely the correct term for it. I would not want to make friends with this person at all. The photo is very graphic, Iā??m not sure it relates to the matter you speak upon in the poem though. Very chilling!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Bichon, for taking the time to review my work. The artwork itself was just to add to the horror effect. The blood, the blade, the blood saturated room.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from Abecedarius Rucker
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Absolutely terrifying in just thirteen words--I love it. The perspective of the killer is always the freakiest, with or without a gory picture like the one you chose. -AR

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, AR. I agree, the thoughts that must run through their heads.
    God bless
    Steve
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Neonerwman, Well - what can I say, except horribly well done? LOL! The words alone are gruesome, but the added picture tops it off. It is a great picture because it's the part of the body you cannot see that frightens the imagination. Very well done. Good Luck - regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Dorothy, for this excellent review. I agree about the artwork, leaves some to the imagination.
    God bless'
    Steve
Comment from karenina
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Did you watch American Horror Story again? This is the scene weekly in this season's "1984" version and it's mind numbing. I only see it peripherally as my husband (sadly) enjoys the macabre--but what at once may seem intoxicating will soon eat away a soul! -- Well done!--Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    Love American horror story. I can't imagine what these folks think in their rotted minds as they carry out these atrocities. Thank you for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
reply by karenina on 09-Nov-2019
    I loved some of them. Sarah Paulson made the show and I so miss her this season. I don't know what the writer's were thinking this year! I saw enough slasher films IN 1984 that to relive them is actually (excuse the pun) OVERKILL!--K
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a truly horrifying piece for the 13 Word Horror Poetry contest.
Your red font on black makes it even more intense.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Sharon, happy this one has been well received. I enjoyed the challenge with this one.
    God bless
    Steve