Little Round Robin
5-7-5 bye-bye blackbird contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet. I gave you your second vote!
I have fed occasional a robin in winter .. Their vivid breast is beautiful against the snow.
They are very aggressive indeed.
If a Robin sings during Winter it means it is healthy and can spare energy to sing and keep intruders out of its territory.
Another bird I love is the blackbird .. I 'm attracted to the male's bright orange beak.
Pa. The pic you chose is lovely ... On the other hand writing and background colour choice is not the best.
It's was hard to read your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Ciao poet. I gave you your second vote!
I have fed occasional a robin in winter .. Their vivid breast is beautiful against the snow.
They are very aggressive indeed.
If a Robin sings during Winter it means it is healthy and can spare energy to sing and keep intruders out of its territory.
Another bird I love is the blackbird .. I 'm attracted to the male's bright orange beak.
Pa. The pic you chose is lovely ... On the other hand writing and background colour choice is not the best.
It's was hard to read your poem.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Dear tempeste, Thank you for your vote, information, and review. Thank you for complimenting the picture I chose. I will go in and edit colors.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great picture of the little bird, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. I was waiting for the little robin to fly away. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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What a great picture of the little bird, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. I was waiting for the little robin to fly away. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a cute, succinct poem, but the brown background color makes it very difficult to read. The picture is the ideal complement to the piece. It is an excellent contest entry.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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This is a cute, succinct poem, but the brown background color makes it very difficult to read. The picture is the ideal complement to the piece. It is an excellent contest entry.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Dear Susan, Thank you for your review. I will go in and change the color.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's a pretty bird that you're describing here. It does indeed look like it's about to take flight or freeze to death trying. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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That's a pretty bird that you're describing here. It does indeed look like it's about to take flight or freeze to death trying. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your review and compliments.
