Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well done, besides the Stevie Nicks song it reminds me of a song by Cher "Gypsies, Tramps an Thieves" I think it was, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Thank you, I was surprised to find the Stevie Nicks one without all the musical drama to it. I remember Cher's song well! LOL! appreciate you stopped to read and enjoy! :) xoxo

Comment from Tanvi Pauddar

Exceptional

I really, really, REALLY, loved your poem, because the words you chose were really good. I enjoyed reading your poem a LOT! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019

Thank you very much!!! This was a first for me in this style. So happy you enjoyed it! xoxo

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 06-Nov-2019

Welcome. Good luck in the contest!

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019

xoxo

reply by Tanvi Pauddar on 09-Nov-2019

:) xoxo

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A great poem about a gypsy girl who is beautiful as she sings and shakes her tambourine. She can read your life from tarot
cards and make you believe what she's told you is true. Very well written poem and the picture you chose is beautiful and adds to it well.
God bless!
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019

Thank you! appreciate your reading and leaving feedback on this! xoxo

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your fantasy-inspired ottava rima. good job holding to 11 syllables per line and with the rhyme scheme. Your words are filled with great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019

Thanks, Jan! That was not an easy task, but I love the challenge! appreciate you read and offered me feedback! xoxo