"Beautiful!"
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "On My Knees"Poetry at it's finest.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well penned, my friend, and a most inspiring read. The content is expressed in simple terms which disguise a powerful and lingering impact on the reader. Well done and thank you vey much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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This is well penned, my friend, and a most inspiring read. The content is expressed in simple terms which disguise a powerful and lingering impact on the reader. Well done and thank you vey much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Always my pleasure to hear from you Mystic Angel and enjoy this up-and-coming New Year's.
Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very moving offering, Ricky -- and a great coloring presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
And, ad I move ever --> And, as I move ever
for I know possess the --> for I now possess the
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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A very moving offering, Ricky -- and a great coloring presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
And, ad I move ever --> And, as I move ever
for I know possess the --> for I now possess the
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanks and caught the spags.
Ricky
Comment from Lulube
A death poem with style. i don't know how else to take it. A calmness comes from you about your time to pass on, doesn't seem to bother you. good space to be in i guess
lulube
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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A death poem with style. i don't know how else to take it. A calmness comes from you about your time to pass on, doesn't seem to bother you. good space to be in i guess
lulube
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Death?
For some?
Diss-Heartening.
Me?
A change of pace.
Working on something different as you requested.
Based on Charity and Christmas.
Ricky
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sounds interesting
lulube
Comment from tim dodd
'And yes, I shall not cry for I know possess the Keys...
did you mean I know who possess the keys?
Sounds like you are a firm believer in the after life.
But if you are still alive is it really dying? I guess its a death on earth and a birth in heaven hopefully. Kind of sad and happy at the same
time I guess.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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'And yes, I shall not cry for I know possess the Keys...
did you mean I know who possess the keys?
Sounds like you are a firm believer in the after life.
But if you are still alive is it really dying? I guess its a death on earth and a birth in heaven hopefully. Kind of sad and happy at the same
time I guess.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Read the editors notes and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have no other way but to pray on your knees, the incident took place, you have lost the irreparable loss of your beloved's life; destiny took away everything; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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You have no other way but to pray on your knees, the incident took place, you have lost the irreparable loss of your beloved's life; destiny took away everything; well said, well done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much alcreator.
Doctor Ricky 1024