...This world is given to lying
Ours has become a world of used car salesmen...5 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
My sentiments exactly!
In fact, I began an entry for this competition, and my topic was "honesty!"
HONEST!!!!
Too funny!
I have to admit that I found my scribbles utterly depressing!
Yours, on the other hand, speak volumes of the reality of our world!
Well-penned!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
My sentiments exactly!
In fact, I began an entry for this competition, and my topic was "honesty!"
HONEST!!!!
Too funny!
I have to admit that I found my scribbles utterly depressing!
Yours, on the other hand, speak volumes of the reality of our world!
Well-penned!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Bless you for such a nice review. This one fell into place pretty fast for me. I have a daughter in education and we all stay frustrated at what she faces in her large school district. The national news keeps me angry and the people who pay for top college entrance tricks frustrate me. I appreciated this opportunity to vent. Thanks for readin' n' writen'!
Comment from LisaMay
Like you, I too have just become a life member of the Cynical Club - looking on in disgust at how our values have been undermined by dishonesty, greed, self interest, vanity... and an overwhelming litany of lying.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Like you, I too have just become a life member of the Cynical Club - looking on in disgust at how our values have been undermined by dishonesty, greed, self interest, vanity... and an overwhelming litany of lying.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Indeed, LisaMay, seems we have lost our way. Thanks for your supportive review. Let us be of good cheer and do what we can. Best regards,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Huzzah!! :) ;) A wonderful venting although, as a retired/part-time teacher who interacts with our youth everyday, I would say that NONE of it is inconsequential! And that is a compliment on how well you've addressed this topic! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Huzzah!! :) ;) A wonderful venting although, as a retired/part-time teacher who interacts with our youth everyday, I would say that NONE of it is inconsequential! And that is a compliment on how well you've addressed this topic! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I expected to hear from you, Ms. Teacher. One daughter is a magnet coordinator and keeps us churning with the stories. She loves all the kids works from her heart, but was accused of being an example of "white privilege". She cried all weekend. She won't consider a career change, however. Thanks for reading and the nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel your disgust in your words here. I do think that people try to rewrite history, some try to say the holocaust didn't happen and that the men didn't land on the moon! These stupid people make me very mad because some people believe it! I have heard lies told even in my own family that have been believed! I know that in the UK they are particular about history and its accuracy but I'm not sure that extends to the Press! I enjoyed your poem here, it is an eye opener, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I feel your disgust in your words here. I do think that people try to rewrite history, some try to say the holocaust didn't happen and that the men didn't land on the moon! These stupid people make me very mad because some people believe it! I have heard lies told even in my own family that have been believed! I know that in the UK they are particular about history and its accuracy but I'm not sure that extends to the Press! I enjoyed your poem here, it is an eye opener, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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How can a man concentrate on the review when it is accompanied by the picture of a beautiful lady, with a charming smile and a glass of wine? Always a pleasure, Ms. Dolly. What exciting times in the UK this week! I am sure that the pols and the press are all telling the truth, are they not? And then the Harry and William spat! How do you have any time to read poetry from the colonies? love ya! Be happy!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Glad you found my offering within tolerance. But, could you relate to it, do you agree? What do you think? Thanks for your time and interest.
