~ Earth, Wind & Fire ~
3-6-9 Stack Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I understood and enjoyed your poem. It made me think of days back when the Indians ruled the plains and how they may have felt exactly like the words in your poem!
**********"Keep right on writing!"**********
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I understood and enjoyed your poem. It made me think of days back when the Indians ruled the plains and how they may have felt exactly like the words in your poem!
**********"Keep right on writing!"**********
Patty
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you Patty. I appreciate your review. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful suite of 3-6-9 poems. Well composed and displayed. Illustration is appropriate, but the focus is on your well written piece. Best of luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This is a wonderful suite of 3-6-9 poems. Well composed and displayed. Illustration is appropriate, but the focus is on your well written piece. Best of luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn, as always, for your encouraging review. I hope you are well :-) ~DD
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this 3/6/9 poetry contest my friend. Oh when one had real hope in one's life, there is nothing that can waylay that or torture the heart of the faithful, though hell stand against you cannot fall. Beautifully expressed in this gem. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent entry in this 3/6/9 poetry contest my friend. Oh when one had real hope in one's life, there is nothing that can waylay that or torture the heart of the faithful, though hell stand against you cannot fall. Beautifully expressed in this gem. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for your most encouraging review on my stack poem 3-6-9. Warm regards ~DD
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Good job
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have written a forceful poem depicting the strength of the struggle to survive and the persistence and perseverance that will bring you through to the light which waits to be savored. Great picture. Hope I got it right.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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You have written a forceful poem depicting the strength of the struggle to survive and the persistence and perseverance that will bring you through to the light which waits to be savored. Great picture. Hope I got it right.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Yes, you got it right Raffaelina :-) Thank you for taking the time to review my 3-6-9 stacked poem. ~DD
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest.
Your message is strong in your short verse.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the cotnest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest.
Your message is strong in your short verse.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the cotnest.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Sharon. I appreciate you taking the time to review my short piece. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about the earth, wind, and fire. We walk on solid ground daily and the blowing winds push us to a broader course. The fire brings the heat to see the light of change.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A very well-written 3-6-9 poem about the earth, wind, and fire. We walk on solid ground daily and the blowing winds push us to a broader course. The fire brings the heat to see the light of change.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review. ~DD
Comment from Gail Denham
I wonder if you write from experience of being in one of the terrible wild fires that have happened in recent years. I think of the town of Paradise - completely destroyed. It's heartbreaking. A good poem, having a good look at what a fire does and is.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I wonder if you write from experience of being in one of the terrible wild fires that have happened in recent years. I think of the town of Paradise - completely destroyed. It's heartbreaking. A good poem, having a good look at what a fire does and is.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Gail, thank you for your review. Your comments are appreciated. I have not experienced, first hand, the heat of fires that claim everything in its path but we have a lot of bush fires here that announce their presence alarmingly during the warmer seasons. ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
The clever thing about this 3-6-9 poem ios the cross rhyme in each tercet from the fourth syllable of the second line to the final syllable of the third. This feature give the poem a delightful unity.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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The clever thing about this 3-6-9 poem ios the cross rhyme in each tercet from the fourth syllable of the second line to the final syllable of the third. This feature give the poem a delightful unity.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Pantygynt - Thank you. I always appreciate your thoughtful reviews and encouragement. ~DD
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well written poem. I especially like the way you have constructed your rhyme scheme. The format meets the requirements laid out in the contest guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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This is a well written poem. I especially like the way you have constructed your rhyme scheme. The format meets the requirements laid out in the contest guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Susan. I appreciate your review. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and
presentation for your poem, DD.
-The syllable count and
imagery are good, along with rhyme.
-I like your take on the topic.
-You use the heat to focus on
"a broader course" and a
"leap in renewed faith."
-We need a lot of faith
every day to get us through
everything going on around us.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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-A good image and
presentation for your poem, DD.
-The syllable count and
imagery are good, along with rhyme.
-I like your take on the topic.
-You use the heat to focus on
"a broader course" and a
"leap in renewed faith."
-We need a lot of faith
every day to get us through
everything going on around us.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem 3-6-9. As always Pam, I am very grateful. ~DD
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You are quite welcome, DD.
