Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You get more right, my friend, than you give yourself credit for. This is well penned and an enjoyable reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Thanks Angel.
Writting on these subjects seems to help.
Ricky

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I hate it when someone wants to kill himself but is too cowardly to do it on his own and has to take another innocent life with him. You will never stop missing your boy, Ricky, but one day, we all will meet up again. That belief and thought stays with us and makes our day to day living a little easier to bear. The imagery in your words of what Heaven is like is so nice. Big hugs, my friend. xx Sandra xx

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Glad you enjoyed this Sandra.
Ricky

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

"And, Cotton-Candied Sprinkles come down and coats your hands!"
"Don't let it it was he ground!"

The last line needs work but this is so light and carefree that it makes my heart happy
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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Thanks and I corrected it.
RIcky

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem and your imagination of what heaven was like. I wasn't so sure of what you met by 'Sheen' and confused at the beginning as to the opportunities he had of entering heaven, Also, sorry about the tragic accident that you inserted.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Sheen is another word for Glow Brightly.
And, thanks!
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your conversation with God and the candy-coated concept of Heaven! You have a fertile imagination and a good extended metaphor here.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Thanks tfawcus.
I enjoy writing about heaven I start doing it two years ago after reading a book The Man had been a minister and was it a conference in down south.
when he was leaving it was raining he decide to take a different way his wife warned him not to cuz he wanted to see different scenery as he was going over a bridge he was head on with my tractor trailer.
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didn't I tell you to shut up and made the radio and his friend who was a minister at the conference came to comfort him but he was told by the paramedics he was covered in he was dead.
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his friend didn't carry been in Vietnam he wanted to still go in there to be with his friend.
This is where I started to get my ideas for heaven for is friend that was in the accident was now in heaven who left his body he was welcomed firstly by a lot of friends and then he was amazed by the music and all the angels singing!
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and this is when the supposedly dead person started singing and as his friend who was there to be with him started also singing he realize he was alive!
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at this point he alerted one of the paramedics who assured him that he was dead the other one came to appease him in and realize that he wasn't.
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I only ready chapters because the pain that this man had to go through it incredible from dying several times more from pneumonia and other problems to coming back to life.
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This was the beginning of where I started getting my interpretations from heaven and thanks again.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

This write caught my attention. I was amazed at your author notes about your son. Donations are a good thing and has given another chance at life. Thank you for a job well done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks Ben.
And my son Jason thanks you too!
Ricky

reply by Ben Colder on 14-Oct-2019

My blessings to you both.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting post and poem you have penned about going to Heaven. I don't know what it looks like, but I just bet it is the most beautiful and amazing place ever. Since our Lord will be there it has to be beautiful. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

So true Terri and thanks.
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