Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I LOVE the word "fluffle" as it describes what birds do so much better than mere ruffle :). This is well done and an enjoyable read. Thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

When I was looking for a word to describe action of an angels wings believe it or not that was the first word that came in my head and I don't I didn't even figured it was or did possibly exist.
Thanks again,
Ricky

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderful voice of looking toward the heavenly realm... I just love the words 'fluffle my wings'... truly gives the reader a feel for being other-worldly! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks Y. M.Rodger
4 Sharing a moment in Heaven with me and Jay!
Ricky

Comment from J Lou hunt

Excellent

This is written beautifully. When I read the story behind the story, it made more sense, I am sorry about your son. May his soul rest in peace. Also thank you, for spreading the word about organ donation

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks Lou for hunting me down.
Jay says thanks too!
Ricky