Picture Perfect
A descriptive one21 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a well penned and delightfully engaging read. You describe the day beautifully allowing the reader to share each an every experience with you fully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
This is a well penned and delightfully engaging read. You describe the day beautifully allowing the reader to share each an every experience with you fully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thank YOU, Monica.
Comment from BeasPeas
Well written. Is that a photo of you walking with your rose-colored skirt? Your opening paragraph sets the happy tone for this piece. We all have places that resonate with us. This seems to be your happy place. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
Well written. Is that a photo of you walking with your rose-colored skirt? Your opening paragraph sets the happy tone for this piece. We all have places that resonate with us. This seems to be your happy place. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Yes, it is me... :)
Thanks for reading.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
It sounds like Bourton is the perfect place for a mini-vacation. Any place that gives you a new perspective and helps wash away the stress is surely a vacation destination worth seeing.
Your descriptions are unique enough to help me feel I could see this place through your words. Great story!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
It sounds like Bourton is the perfect place for a mini-vacation. Any place that gives you a new perspective and helps wash away the stress is surely a vacation destination worth seeing.
Your descriptions are unique enough to help me feel I could see this place through your words. Great story!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much, Brenda.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Maria :)
I can see why you return to Bourton year after year... it sounds wonderful.
To feel like you 'belong' somewhere must be fantastic. I don't think I ever truly felt like I belonged. I've always been a square peg trying to fit into a round hole...maybe I need to soften my edges! Or not!
I love your flavour suggestions for the blue ice-cream... I wonder what a smurf tastes like?!
I really enjoyed reading your descriptive piece. Full of vivid mind pictures and an engaging narrative, it's a pleasure to read :)
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
Hello Maria :)
I can see why you return to Bourton year after year... it sounds wonderful.
To feel like you 'belong' somewhere must be fantastic. I don't think I ever truly felt like I belonged. I've always been a square peg trying to fit into a round hole...maybe I need to soften my edges! Or not!
I love your flavour suggestions for the blue ice-cream... I wonder what a smurf tastes like?!
I really enjoyed reading your descriptive piece. Full of vivid mind pictures and an engaging narrative, it's a pleasure to read :)
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for your review, Debra.
I enjoyed reading it.xxx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written descriptive piece about the picture perfect Cotswold where you enjoyed a wonderful time and you feel that you belong there and questioned the Stork that he delivered you in the wrong place.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
A very well-written descriptive piece about the picture perfect Cotswold where you enjoyed a wonderful time and you feel that you belong there and questioned the Stork that he delivered you in the wrong place.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Sandra. Hugs.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yes, this is very descriptive. I don't know if this is biographical, but this person has definitely gotten in touch with her inner child.
Fish and chips - how British. Did you say you were born there or went to school in England. I'll have to look at your page again. I had to smile when I read the two year old had a camera. I wonder if that's politically correct. Oh, well, who cares, it was cute. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
Yes, this is very descriptive. I don't know if this is biographical, but this person has definitely gotten in touch with her inner child.
Fish and chips - how British. Did you say you were born there or went to school in England. I'll have to look at your page again. I had to smile when I read the two year old had a camera. I wonder if that's politically correct. Oh, well, who cares, it was cute. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I go to England on holiday, but it feels like home. I didn't go to school there, but I've done a lot of courses at Oxford University online and now I'm doing a Masters at a London Uni.
Thanks for another kind review.
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Very impressive, Maria. I know you have a strong command of the English language.
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:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your love of England shows through in your words here Maria and maybe you were born in the wrong place? Ha ha ha, I liked your cute and endearing story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
Your love of England shows through in your words here Maria and maybe you were born in the wrong place? Ha ha ha, I liked your cute and endearing story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Hugs.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a lovely account of a worthwhile day spent in a place you love and relating to in a good and enjoyable way. There is a sense of peace about the writing that your descriptions bring out very well.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
This is a lovely account of a worthwhile day spent in a place you love and relating to in a good and enjoyable way. There is a sense of peace about the writing that your descriptions bring out very well.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Hugs.
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You're truly welcome, my friend!! :-)
Comment from Bichon
You have done such an excellent job at narrating your surroundings and putting the reader in your place to see it all. Your descriptive writes are always amazing!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
You have done such an excellent job at narrating your surroundings and putting the reader in your place to see it all. Your descriptive writes are always amazing!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading and for the sparking star.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for taking us along to one of your favorite places. I like your reflective observations about the town and the lovely river, the cemetery, the museum with its topiary. You made me want to see this place.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
Thanks for taking us along to one of your favorite places. I like your reflective observations about the town and the lovely river, the cemetery, the museum with its topiary. You made me want to see this place.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading. Hugs.